Wyatt was alone in the world. When the rifts opened the world was thrown into chaos. Archaic mages came through those rifts, and war after war followed. The last war had ended when Wyatt was just a baby, but he had still lost his eye to it. The empty socket, and loss of depth perception made him an easy target.
Wyatt being an orphan meant that no one back him up when he did get targeted. Wyatt was used to fighting for himself, and the draft was going to force him into military academy. He had no genetic markers to become an ability user so he had already accepted the fact that he would probably die during his two years required military rotation after the academy.
It was just a fact of life. Non ability users were just cannon fodder, and archaic abilities were highly restricted. Wyatt didn't think anything off it. That is until he found a marble in an old rift area. A marble that would change everything.
Im going to be Honest right know this book is good Wait No amazing out of the books ive read online and ofline this book full put all of what i wanted normally in a book you would not like all of it like some parts are bad some Are good but this it like a perfect book i only have one problem with i and it dose Not involved the stars it that there is not enough chapters Ps great Job hope you keep up the good work
I thought the story will be very cool because its about a dragon which i think is really cool and amazing. That he can camouflage is awsome too and its good that his power gets reduced as he is in his human form. That was the good part till chapter 17 so far. But now to my not so overly good rating. And its about his bonding system which makes no sense at all and i dont like the interaction between himeself and that dimwit Ethan. In this interaction i think there is missing a charakteristic which i think is the best of a dragon the arrogance and being proud but well not every one think of a dragon as i do. And second of all a bonding system which does no sense to me as the system says its a manifastion of his power but why can he bond whitout even giving his consent because that leads me to think he isnt even in controll over his own power. Another thing i dont like at all is that he can share his power a little bit which utterly disappoints me in some way. Like he needs to do everything and the other completly weeklings can just grow with him. Not to mention the weird way of interacting between those two.
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I love this story! I really love dragons so the general theme of this story is amazing, and he doesn't just start out and bang bang look he is the most powerful being in existence, there is actual progression, near death experiences, and all kinds of things that make the story amazing! My biggest problem with it that is just a side effect of being impatient is I read fast so I'm going to have to wait at least four or five days for the next chapter. Keep up the good work! ( I promise I will buy the books later on when I have the money )
Very good story I could not stop reading I do have a question is the book on here ahead of the ones on Amazon and if so what is the difference between the two?
An enjoyable novel to read through, i recommend reading it if you already havent. Though in some places the story is a little slow or forced it is overall very fun to read.
I started reading three days ago and am at 32X now. A bit slow paced but a great personality for a human turned dragon in human environment. I’m unsure if it’s better to wait a for few chapters every now and then or if you can read them every day. (because slow pace)
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Does he have wings? Or Is his wings his front claws?————-—— /- -//—-——-—-—-Alos i really like the Story so far! Good job! ////////:/://////////
Does he get a permanent form anytime soon. I’m on chapter 22 and I dont like how he has to transform and hide it everytime. At least make it so he has his actual stats all the time.
how in the world is this book not in the top ten this is super good and is on par if not better then my vampire system which at the time of writing this is number 1 please read this book do NOT miss out on something this good althou the chapter updates have slowed from what i can see but i could not put down my phone to stop reading this until i read all 110 chapter that at the time of this reveiw this has my highest praise and no as far as ive read this does not have bl and it does not look like it will in the future
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