Abyssal Firmament
Jin was a mortal reincarnated into a cultivation world.
He made a name for himself and became a person while far from reaching the peak was a person feared by angels, devils, and the fallen.
But when he came across a powerful treasure in the abyss he was ambushed and killed.
When he thought it was over he was reincarnated into a new world, in a new era with his memories and the treasure he was killed for.
Join his journey as he rises above all and reigns supreme.
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This is my first try at creating a novel. After reading so much, I decided I wanted to make my own. I would appreciate some advice and tips to improve as I am a newbie writer.
The cover picture is not mine if wanted to be taken down, let me know.
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Disclaimer:
The following story is purely fictional and the plot is not to be associated with actual historical or religious records.
All characters and plots in this book are totally fictional. There is no intentional disrespect shown to any community. Please be understanding towards the plot and read it as fictional. This story is purely created for the readers’ entertainment purposes.
I know I'm shameless, but in this case, I'm not. It is only shameless when it is a lie, whereas this is not. so, when I say this book is going places, I mean it. The writing quality: Topnotch, and I'm certain it will continue to get better. World building: Come on, you can't find any better than this out there. Character development: One of the absolute most promising character I have read lately. Overall, this is by far one of the best novel on this site.
Good story with lots of potential, right now there is only 17 chapters but it is still good. Hopefully once there is about 100 chapters we can see the story shine
I think it’s past time for me to make a review for this masterpiece. Pretty much this novel with a lot of characters with a deep background, with their own stories. And even thought the cast seems to be big author is managing to give a life to each of the characters, including the heroines and villains. Something that many authors fails to do with a way smaller cast. Just for this he gets 5 star from me. Don’t expect pure and good characters but also don’t expect bunch of cold hearted monsters. Everyone has their own flaws and their own bottomlines which gives more sense of realism. If you guys want to read a story with hot women joining the harem, baddass mc, and a serious plot give this a try.
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I really like hope you keep up the good work
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What a great plot, totally in love with this one even the characters are amazing. I will recommend this to everyone, This book really has great potential and I am sure the upcoming chapters will get even more interesting, keep it up your story is awesome 💖💖💖💖
Even as tired as I was, I forced myself to read all the way through this. I liked it. It's a interesting story. I like Hakari. Good job on portraying the characters.
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I've only read the first few chapters and it is quite clear you have taken some inspiration from 'monarch of darkness', which I did find as quite and amazing novel, so I am hoping that this novel will be a top class novel MOA
Overall I can say that it's well written and the Dao aspect is something I find really intriguing the only thing that takes me out of the story would be the amount of vulgarity, I'm not saying that it doesn't have it's place especially for a character that has it as a part of their personality but it almost seems like it's non stop every few sentences from most of the characters so far(I've reached chapter 28) which really threw me out of my immersion of the story itself.
I have a couple of complaints and critiques, first of all why did you think it'd be a good idea to add a "3 wishes" sort of thing to your story? not only does it serve to lessen our impression of power of the characters where they could instantaneously just wish for power and boom suddenly they're able to destroy worlds with a single punch, just avoid "3 wishes and gacha and even log in type of plots" the authors of those types of novels usually do not have the imagination to think of anything better than junk food novels. and secondly I can't stress this enough STOP USING "Modern Words" such as simp, beta male and whatnot honestly just ruins the flow of the story it's not funny nor is it fun to read, It's just an eyesore whenever you read them.