Just here to say that this is a very enjoyable and well written book, I didn't notice any grammar mistakes or misspellings. Because of there is only 4 chapters I cant say much about the story development or stability of updates but the mc has been (in my opinion) quite well fleshed out for the short time the author has had and I've got a feel for his character. I hope this author keeps updating and if he does I'll make sure to give my power stones as well.
4 years ago
4
RichieRichard
honestly haven't laughed so hard in a while, thanks a lot Author-san you've made my day.
please don't end it too fast though, your reaching the climax pretty fast with Bellamy being so overpowered.
4 years ago
2
Nafsu_geass28
1. is this ntr 2. whether he will care for and look after the women in his harem 3. Is this a big harem
1. is this ntr 2. whether he will care for and look after the women in his harem 3. Is this a big harem
4 years ago
2
BrownOptometrist
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
4 years ago
2
jeanpierregerardo
interesing history.
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4 years ago
1
Amir_Blumenfeld
awesome story.
3 years ago
0
Dead_123
NOVEL MANTAP, NOVEL BAGUS, NOVEL MEGAH, NOVEL MEWAH TAPI MURAH, NOVEL YANG MENGHILANGKAN DEPRESI, NOVEL PENGHIBUR, TETAP SEMANGAT AKAN KAMI TUNGGU LANJUTANNYA THOR..........
Author, I don't know how you're going to build the ship, because I'm still on chapter 10 (I'm a new reader), but I wanted to suggest a fruit that I thought of, that you could feed to Bell's ship (it's an invented fruit), it flame Transform Transform No Mi, based on Transforms, the fruit can follow two paths:
The first being that the ship can transform into a Transforms;
The second is that the ship has the power to transform into any vehicle, from cars to planes or even spacecraft (now if you want to be simpler, the ship can only transform into other types of ships, but in this case I thought of the name of the fruit, instead of Transform Transform No Mi would be Ship Ship No Mi).
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Just here to say that this is a very enjoyable and well written book, I didn't notice any grammar mistakes or misspellings. Because of there is only 4 chapters I cant say much about the story development or stability of updates but the mc has been (in my opinion) quite well fleshed out for the short time the author has had and I've got a feel for his character. I hope this author keeps updating and if he does I'll make sure to give my power stones as well.
honestly haven't laughed so hard in a while, thanks a lot Author-san you've made my day. please don't end it too fast though, your reaching the climax pretty fast with Bellamy being so overpowered.
1. is this ntr 2. whether he will care for and look after the women in his harem 3. Is this a big harem 1. is this ntr 2. whether he will care for and look after the women in his harem 3. Is this a big harem
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
interesing history. *************************************************************************************************************************************************************
awesome story.
NOVEL MANTAP, NOVEL BAGUS, NOVEL MEGAH, NOVEL MEWAH TAPI MURAH, NOVEL YANG MENGHILANGKAN DEPRESI, NOVEL PENGHIBUR, TETAP SEMANGAT AKAN KAMI TUNGGU LANJUTANNYA THOR..........
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Author, I don't know how you're going to build the ship, because I'm still on chapter 10 (I'm a new reader), but I wanted to suggest a fruit that I thought of, that you could feed to Bell's ship (it's an invented fruit), it flame Transform Transform No Mi, based on Transforms, the fruit can follow two paths: The first being that the ship can transform into a Transforms; The second is that the ship has the power to transform into any vehicle, from cars to planes or even spacecraft (now if you want to be simpler, the ship can only transform into other types of ships, but in this case I thought of the name of the fruit, instead of Transform Transform No Mi would be Ship Ship No Mi).