My Goddess System
Author: Rimpa
4.43
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Kayden lane, an average male soldier that died in combat, finds himself reincarnated into a goddess, and yes, a GODDESS. He finds a new way to live life more enjoyably. But finding some difficulty living an enjoyable life, he will do anything to live the life he loves.
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Please at least read the first 30 chapters. This is my first novel, so the beginning might be slow but gets seriously better later on. And you also might find the MC kinda naive. But it gets better, later on, I swear.
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Other novels: Reincarnation of the Empire’s legend(It’s also genderbend)
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This is really goooooood :O :D please continue making more chapters. I will definitely give stones. If you drop this, I will never forgive you >:(
Very good author-sa keep up the good work author-san i have a question can she travel in anime world? ....................................................................................................................................
This is freakishly close to what I was looking for in a GB MTF, so freakishly close that I suspect the author has been probing my mind using psychokinesis aside from some minor spelling errors, this is a pretty good read.
The story is very fun to read and also addicting. It's the beginning of the story so the characters design/growth are okay for now. The background of the world should be more explained but the author has already told it will be written about later. Sadly the author has stopped uploading new chapters out of nowhere while before he was uploading it almost daily (T_T) . I would definitely recommend it to anyone who likes these kinds of novels.
Writing quality: It's okay pretty simplistic. Stability of updates: Okay/Good. Story Development: For someone who's making their own world/universe, there is a severe lack of descriptions of the planet she currently resides in (read up to chapter 9) how does the economy of the world work? Why are there only 5 nations on a planet that have 60+ billion people? How is the political climate of each nation? What's the name of the 5 nations? Whose military did he serve in out of the supposed 5 nations? How did he make it into the military? How is the military structured in this world/planet? What are the climates of the world/planet? Are there any environmental differences compared to Earth besides the obvious? If the planet has 60+ billion people, how big is the planet? If the planet is so big how has that affected the 'human' race? What are the civilizations like on the planet/world? How is the technological level of the planet/world? If there are 60+ billion people on the planet/world I'd assume the tech level would be pretty high in this world/planet so how is it then, the world has the supposed same technology level as earth, as described by his parents dying in a car crash? These are just some of the things you have to consider when building a world/planet. Character Design: The MC is Naive, stupid, and relies entirely on his system. World Background can be explained in my story development comment/critic.
Everything is good for me,there are things that irks me and there are few holes like mc is god now and she should have different mentality and higher intelligence and a lot more,writing is readable and it is easy to understand,it irks me that mc do not use his status points and do not focus to get as stronger as she can get but it is your novel,even if i dont like mc i dont hate him but her skill talent is interesting and it truly show what talent should be like and not like in other novels or fanfict where it boost learning by 5 to 10 times or similar,the only questions i have do mc now like guys or?or he still like girls?and will there be romance?
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There's a lot of typos which indicates that this might have been written on the spot, and the slice-of-life feeling that I got from reading this novel reinforce this speculation. The mc is a Mary Sue which I've no problem as long as you make it interesting. Some side characters have Japanese names which made it jarring for me since I thought you would stick with western ones. To be honest, I might've liked this novel in the past but a lot of time had passed since the last time I read this. Now coupled with my webnovel cynicism, I think you need to rewrite this and make the usage of words more efficient like getting rid of unnecessary expositions and following Chevkov's Gun for most of the part.
is this little baby here drop or on hiatus? i dont know 'bout updating stability but still 5 star cu'z the overall story is 😊😊
I love this story mc and world development is amazing please never drop this New chapters now give me new life. Can’t wait till next chapter you have a talent as an author👍😸
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The story is really good, and I love the characters, especially the demon butler which really resembles Diablo of reincarnation as a slime. I really want more chapters, but it seems like the author died and stopped writing.
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