Sparror Volume 1

A story that asks you, what'd you do with a power given? The character is relatable, I mean, who wouldn't draw their own superhero, and think of becomes one if they can? And made an action pack of a story as this novel Sparror. Though you may find a few flaws (which we would in everything) you'd still find this world in your thought before switching to the colder side of your pillow. Don't stop writing, don't stop improving, don't stop sharing, don't stop having fun.

First of all, this book has so much potential! This is one of the best books of this genre that I've read. The writing style was perfect for my taste 😊❤️ The characters were well-made and described, the relationship between the characters are well- written. The world background was fluid and easy to follow. I especially commend the descriptive style of the author. It really brings you to the story. This story is something, love it!

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It is my first time reading a novel in this genre. The character designs and world background are just amazing. I am going to add this book to my library and give this book a try. Great work Author👍👍👍 You have great potential for writing.

I'm in chapter 70, and so far the novel is quite interesting. Your descriptions are top notch as well. This story should definitely be among the best non-system novels

The views needs to be greater for this novel 👏👏 Currently at chapter 7 and it's been a good read. This isn't a system novel... finally 😎 we need more stuff like this. The creativity behind this definitely shows and I applaud the author for their hard work and writing skills. Please read, it's a wonderful story.

Okay... I still don't know why your book is not on the top, because this DESERVES to be on top! The way you write is amazing, the narration is very descriptive which is one of the reasons I liked it. And the characters are all cool, and their development in the story is really intriguing to see! There are some grammatical errors though which sometimes disturb my flow of reading the book, but it's not that much that you can't understand the story. If you want to fix it, I suggest that you download Grammarly, because it'll help you fix them when you're updating. All in all, I'm very excited to see your story become more popular. I'll keep supporting and watching your growth.

This just might be the next best novel in WN if the writer keeps writing! Very descriptive and feels like a REAL novel while reading. There are no filler words that other writers use to just fill their quota of the day. The story is great, there is good development and infinite possibilities where this novel can go. You might be wondering then, why isn't this novel popular already? The obvious reasons are - it is new and the cover is not attractive. If you go past that point and follow this novel, you are in for a treat!

Hey author 👋 I'm here to shear my thoughts, writing quality on point, the story plot the characters I love everything about it I'm not into fantasy novels so much but this one passed 🔥 [img=recommend] Just keep updating chapters Your readers wants to read more 💛

After reading for some time, I concluded that the author has impeccable talent. Words were very delightful to read and the narration was very vivid. I love superheroes and All might is one example. One punch man too! haha 😂 I think that with few edits, it will be perfect! Typos were on its lowest and it didn't hinder my reading experience. The plot was getting more and more exciting with more reading. I support you author for your success! Five stars! [img=recommend]

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Really amazing story. What I liked the most of it was the character design. You create actual personalities for your characters and not just create characters (hard to explain). Also love the anime/manga style hero stories.

Awesome novel. Keep up your good work, author.

A very nice story indeed. not boring at all as the author revealed the meat without taking up lots of chaps. The grammar is good and smooth. I recommend it to anyone who loves superhero novels cuz this one is on point

Wow.. This novel/book is so interesting. The writing style is amazing, the story had great potential. I hope many readers see this book! You guys will not regret reading it💕

I will give the author 5 stars because I like the novel's title! Anyway, here's my critic. Writing Quality- The author have good taste of describing things. He knows when to show and when to tell, which makes the novel engaging. However, there are dozens of passive voice misuse and confusing words that I think you should edit out. Some examples are --*she was spread *was trap *started (avoid using started, since it just delays the active voice/sentence/verb *one was a had short *parted away (I think it should be "Parted ways" since parted is already a word used for diverging two things. The word away shares the same meaning. Besides that, i think this novel is awesome!