Falling Cosmos
Tormented by loan sharks, Lorn had lived the life of an 'ascetic'. He would willingly become homeless and live the life of a beggar (and only sometimes a pickpocket), so his hard-earned money wouldn't fall into his debtors' hands. Hopefully, they would finally leave him alone after realizing he's worth nothing anymore.
But realizing his plans, the debtors decide to sell him as a guinea pig!
The One Country's grand experiment attempting to copy a human's consciousness and put it inside the digital space! The only catch is, 80% of the test subjects are expected to receive lasting damages to their brain.
However, Lorn finds a once-in-a-lifetime chance. The researchers were creating a virtual world using the digital space. And to create profits from it, instead of simply creating boring-old Virtual Earth (and calling it the Metaverse), they were making a game out of it!
The first fully immersive VRMMORPG in the world!
As the first tester of this game, Lorn would be a disgrace if he couldn't make money off of it!
Oh wow- there are so many things about this book. The characters are not 2D at all they are they feel so much more real than that and definitely much more supportable! This is actual GOLD!
Yup! It's sooooo good. Keep it up author! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Late review but here's a 5 star, I think you fairly deserve it as the book didn't fail to entertain me as a reader, plus the writing is great there's really nothing I can complain the book is amazingly done.
I'm happy with my work! It's very good! If you disagree, you're just wrong! (for legal reasons this is a joke) But anyway, if you have criticisms and things you think that are better changed, this is the prime time to voice it! The novel's short enough so I can actually fix stuff easily! (but please don't think I'll do anything you ask of me!) When the novel becomes too long, I'll never change anything ever so don't lose your chance!
I'm making this when chapter 128 is out. The characters and world of this book feel so alive, each with a backround and personality you can really feel. The world is really thought and fleshed out. The quality is consistent and has been good for the whole time. I feel like with more time the novel will become really popular and succeeded as long as the author continues and gives themselves breaks when need be. I look forward to the progression of this book and would highly recommend it as one of the best reads on this site. I know my review doesn't do justice for this but I hope it will atleast help persuade ppl to read!
This is one of my favpeite novels right now. It's really good. I don't kbow about anyone else but I haven't really seen something related to videos games this good in a while. Also Author are you ever going to continue Falling Cosmos?
Amazing VR book. Great characters, interesting system. Rational characters. Up there with the best VR stories I have read . Eagerly Waiting another few hundred chapters.
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"Now comes the part where I relieve you, the little people of the burden of your failed and useless lives. But as my plastic surgeon always said, If you want to go, go with a smile" -- The Joker.
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Your writing quality is superb. I love the way you describe the characters. The fact that he has a debt to pay and that his debtor's sold him reminded me of how brutal some debtor's are. The synopsis is short, but straight to the point and I like that. Overall, a great job considering it's only 8 chapters. All the best, author!
The start of the book alone is already intriguing 👌👌 looking forward to read more about this book. Recommending this book people. keep it up writer 👌
I read the sypnosis first and ''sell him as a guinea pig!'' made me want to read this book even more and i did, all 7 chps btw and it was interesting to see the MC journey, hope he succeeds in his personal mission.
hey, guys please support this book !! this author's work is amazing . I recommend this novel, keep it up, author.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Its a good story about a guy down on his luck and looking for a way out. I'm not sure if the company he's working for will do right by him or liquidate him when its over. It was a fun read.