Naruto: reborn as an Uzumaki
During his effort to save his cousin whom he was in love with from committing suicide, Tom died when the railing he was holding on to broke. But when he woke up, he was reborn as the son of an Uzumaki and an Uchiha.
But he was not born in the hidden leaf, but rather in the hidden rain village. And because of clan issues, had to grow up away from his father and elder sister who presumably died in the Uchiha massacre.
But fate had other plans. Sometime after he turned 15 and was about to turn 16, his life completely changed in the span of two short days.
The story from chapter 4 onwards takes place between the timeskip between the OG series and Shippuden, to be specific, six months before the beginning of Shippuden.
Also while I did add the harem tag MC won't go around catching waifus like pokemon. There will be a very small harem in the future and I will take my sweet time developing it. So don't expect much until the pain arc. The story will be extremely long because I want to flesh out everyone to some extent and give each harem member a legitimate reason and give their relationship a lot of development.
I don't own any of the characters except for the OC's I created. The cover image is ai generated.
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Warning!!!!!
There will be incest so keep that in mind while reading this. Also this book is a work in progress so there will be changes in the future, and I'm open to suggestions.
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Hey everyone author here with the obvious 5 star review this is my first fic and my first attempt at a book so it might not be very good. But I'm open to your suggestions and I'll appreciate it If you guys support me, it means a lot to me
I don't write reviews most of the time but after seeing these haters reviews 😐, I will say that author, you are doing good, don't let these haters get you, It's a good novel, you already added harem tag and even mentioned about siblings in the synopsis then where would these retard people come from!! ( their brain is not braining )
it's been good so far, i'm really looking forward to the future of this story
...manage to read until ch80, but it feels dull and boring further on... DROPPING this👏👏👏😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐
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I want to preface that it's good. It's well written. It has a plot. The characters are fleshed out. The problem is I don't like it. I can't put my finger on it. I'll have to read more to see if I want to drop it but maybe the drama is too much for me. It doesn't feel like a naruto fic. It feels like a romance/drama that was forced into naruto. Despite my feelings, you should give it a try.
Overall its actually pretty good. Its not the first time someone made an Uzumaki/Uchiha mix but this one works. Writings good and I love the lack of blatant chinese racism way too much of that here. Unfortunately I am not a fan of the relationships. I find it suuuuuuuuppppppper creepy and can not get past it. It just ruins the story for me. So while I will personally drop this I will still say its a solid naruto ff.
overall it's good. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is a really interesting and entertaining story with a really good plot as well as character development as the MC tries to find his place in the world he got reincarnated into. And although the first chapters can be quite boring as the story advances the development of the story gets better and better. The romance in the story is pretty good, as it was not rushed like in many other stories, especially the one concerning the MC and the main FL. The story despite having the harem tag doesn't follow a MC who captures women as if they were Pokemons, as the romance between the MC and the different harem members is being slowly built from a friendship towards a true romantic relationship since the harem is rather small (4-5 people). Lastly, for the lemons they are really good and although the first ones weren't that well written compared to the latest one, they're still enjoyable. Though if there's something to criticize, then it would be the absence of the lemon in certain chapters. But either way, they're really good. So to conclude, this is a really interesting and entertaining story to read.
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Interesting concept though I haven’t read it the reviews say it’s bad, I’m probably js gonna leave it in a collection for 3 months but it seems to have potential. I’ll give 4 stars
this story is a amazing story I ever read . it has awesome story plot and development
it feels like reading a chatgpt, a bit stiff and sometimes there are some who get mixed up (character names). also, i kinda don't like the female dominated MC, he's clearly a masochist... it's disgusting to me.