The Divine Wolf... or?

So, I've been seeing authors doing this, so I might as well do it myself, I mean why not? Anyways, I'm very insecure so if you're too harsh with your critique I'm going to go cry in a corner. Nah but for real though, I hope everyone enjoys the story, and if you don't then I hope you manage to find something better out there!

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I like this novel mc rincarnated to wolf anti-mainstream. need more chap hehe

AQUI E BRAZUCA CORRE NEGADA, falando sério está obra tem potencial , por enquanto está bom mas não pare metade das fan-fics não prosperam porque os autores não continuam a obra , e as pessoas acabam perdendo interesse.

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Dumb mc he acts like a dog. Dropped after he followed the princess. MC IS DUMB if that's your cup of tea then this is the book for you..... ... ... ... .. ..

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By chapter 12 the mc and everyone hes meet so far is completly unlikeable, disintersting, and everyone except mary sue princess is a couple brainvells from retarded. Mc starts out wanting to be strong and wanting to gain power quickly. 3 chapter later hes being bullied, put down, and had mary sue use mind manipulation magic on him and HE FEELS BAD FOR GETTING ANGRY AFTER HE GOT DISRESPECTED TO HIS FACE AND SHE USES MAGIC TO AFFECT HIS MIND. I just wish i could give the story .05/5. Completly gutted his own story and didnt make it chapter 20. The most likeable character? The dead enemies the mc killed that are just animals trying to survive.

Great potential until the MC decided to lick humanity's ass and be their pawn. Bullied boy, hates society, etc etc. As a wolf all of that is irrelevant because you know..forced plot must happen. Just..Author, please try to know that if you pick a monster MC, at least try to stick with the monster part. Or just name it "The Divine Wolf..." and stop there. Just remove the or cause that's all he is. A pet. A waste of a novel idea.

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I just really hate that all of theese evolution novels have the main characters become pussies. This book had some really good potential but it ruined it like all the other cliché and ****ty books

This story was off to a decent start, with only a few inconsistencies, but it quickly went downhill from there. The author introduces several new elements to the story, only to suddenly remove them, as if he decided to suddenly change the direction of the story, with so apparent purpose, but the biggest issue I had with the story is the redundant info. In almost every chapter there are one or more entirely redundant paragraphs that either told me absolutely nothing or something that's so obvious a toddler wouldn't need it explained, and as a result I found myself skimming/skipping a lot of the story, and probably missing some of the important stuff. Author should really work on prioritizing what info to keep along instead of padding the story in excess, i.e. a full paragraph of monsters nearing the camp, but MC just had to release his aura so it wasn't a problem anyway. If it wasn't a problem anyway, don't bother telling people about it.