Adam is a neet, a bum, a good for nothing lowlife living in his parents house at the age of 30. No job, no friends and no girlfriend. He spends all day in front of his computer playing video games.
One day due to some freak storm, a lightning strike hits his house and electrecuted him while playing an mmorpg game. When he regains his senses, he wakes up in a Post apocalyptic world. The thing is he also realize that he somehow got a game like system power.
He can now view his stats. He can store items in his storage window. He gains abilities and skills and he can also level them up. But his ultimate power is the ability to save and load his progress.
Author's note:
Expect alot of Remorseless killings. The MC does not care about those who he killed. Expect the MC to be overly OP without the need to work hard for it. Expect the girls in his harem to wet their pretty little pussies at first site of him.
I hate drama, so no mushy dialogues here. You need to read between the lines, this story is not for idiots and please no morons either.
If you're a primadonna, better find some other novels to read. This is not for you.
Keep in mind at all times that the author is EVIL. I take lollipops from kids. I tear their cute little teddy bears apart and scatter their cotton insides through the wind.
Alright is that enough, this should already give you enough ideas on what to expect inside!
If you wish to read a stress free story, where everything works out for the MC, then go ahead read. ^^
writing Quality - I can't say that his grammar sense is bad and I can't say that it is great as well, so 3/5 it is. Story development - it's just terrible MC sees slavers, decides they are savages, kills them all without showing an ounce of mercy and in the next chapter he gets slave of his own. and not to say anything about the 'battle' with slavers taking more than 4.5 hours which is just absurd. Character Design - it's bad, that's all i can say. MC is just psychopath by default because he is a gamer. shows absolutely no reaction to the death of slavers, he uses his drones to make their heads explode and again absolutely no reaction. when he frees the slaves he takes out the guns and ammo from his inventory and again, absolutely no reaction from them. and when he gains slave he just straight up has *** with her... he talks with slaves like nothing while he is supposed to be a neat who knows nothing of the human interactions of the outside world... Writing Quality 3/5 Stability of updates 4/5 because of the fact that it is in the early stages and I will not rate it with 5 stars just yet Story development 1/5 Character Design 1/5 World Background 3/5 just because of the fact that I have only read 11 chapters and there isn't much of a world background explained
The grammar and update stability is amazing, but the story and character development? Nope, this novel might be good for the newbies, but for those who have seen lots of novel(like me) this novel is not that good? Below average I would say, every female character literally got horny by just seeing the mc’s face, which bring us to mc. He’s a neet, but when he got transported he immediately kill people without emotion, then at chapter 7-8? He’s already raping woman, acting like a spoiled young master who thinks he could get anything he wants. I don’t know why this have a high reviews(probably newbies reader) but for those who expect a mature mc, plot, etc then don’t read this or you’ll be disappointed. Enough of the criticism, the author did an amazing job nonetheless, I think what you should do(Author) is read books and learn from them.
Please write a comment if you wish to read more about this story. The story is a bit different compared to most of the stories here in Webnovel.
The story is interesting, it's about a man that died and somehow wakeup in a new world that like his world(?). He have a game-like ability and a super power machine or robot that he can control freely. The writing is good and you can understand it easily. Stability of Updates is good too. One of the thing that I kinda hate, is there's only a little characters development, and even it's only the MC that have it. The harem is like a robot, and just there for the purpose of sexual intercourse, they are there only to satisfy the MC lust. I just hope the author give those girls more feeling and character development, than just to make them like ***-dolls or even ***-robot. Like, give them some back-story or have them jealous at each other, or something like that. We need more feeling from them!! And more feeling from the story itself!!! For world background, it's good enough for me, to understand what happen, why it happens, or where it happens, in that world. One thing that I also hope for the author to do, is to give the other characters do more talking. It's feels empty if only the MC or the characters near the MC that the only people that talks. Also, the last one, I hope you didn't make the MC too depents on his op skill that he forget to train his body more. It's not like he always have that skills, right? I mean, some of the skills still have a cooldown, right? What if he use all of them and their cooldown is running, when a really powerfull enemy in front of him? That's all, maybe the rating I give is low than most rating in this novel's review, but I really can't put all five stars even if I want to. Because I hope the author will realize the error in this novel and fix or improves it in the later chapter. Thanks.
I Love the story so far! It's like every "gamers" dream.. To become op but yet not op.. To be able to become strong in the beginning to give you an edge to "put your foot through the door".. Yet at the same time know that your not truly strong enough and that you have to work hard on an end game to dominate through endlessly hard grinding!.. You just have an ability to give a glimpse of what "true power is like" and that you must "grind" your way to reach it! Thanks for your hard work and keep it up!
Sa wakas. something that I can read again. nakakasawa n ung puro n lng angst ung nababasa d2. paulit ulit n lng. OP ni Adam sobra. Corny lng kasi may mature content.
The novel is very poor. If you've been on this website for any amount of time you'll notice that there is a correlation between how bad a novel is and how many reviews it has from people who speak no legible language. The author switches from first to third person perspective repeatedly. The main character goes from a decent human being to a murderous psychopath in 5 chapters or less. The main character gets a slave girl and has *** with her within the first 12 chapters. GG no RE
OP mc - check. System - check. Harem for those who like them - check. Post apocalyptic world - check. Add more if you like. My point is this novel is worthwhile to follow its development.
I've read this novel before in SOL; I didn’t rate it high back then because there were a lot of spelling and grammar issues. I think he finally listened to us and got himself an editor, although I can still see some issues here and there but not as bad as the original version. Some of the chapters here are new or maybe the author added some new scenes. Without those glaring spelling problems, I can guarantee that this book is freaking awesome. I’ve read some of the comments and reviews here. I have to laugh, what the heck guys, it’s his freaking story, let him tell it the way he wants it. It’s not like you’re paying him to do it. If you know so much about writing a story then go ahead and write something on your own. Then let us criticize the hell out of it too.
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Nice so this story is here now. I saw this story in SOL. But it was not finished there. the author stopped posting. I hope he can continue it here. I really love the story.
Absolutely love it a good story can wait for more. I love the believable character he is an evil absolutely ruthless a bit dumb worth leaving he's only allies behind when he went exploring but apart from that everything else is pretty smart
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