Prime Originator

Hello you, yes, you, the lost and curious reader. I see you have stumbled upon my unholy sanctuary in search of something fun and interesting to read. I cannot say the early chapters are my best work, but it is my first book so do give it a try if you are willing to give this book a chance and allow me to entertain you.

As I stated in one of the chapters. This is by far is one of my top ten favorite books. Keep up the good work Author. I am in love with this novel!! 😊😊😁

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Mediocre writing, OK premise, 5 harem members by chapter 30, write your bad smut elsewhere, extremely disappointed. Why ruin a story with so many harem members?

One of the good books I have read that has a good plot and some quality writing. Author has managed to create characters which seems to be pretty good. The plot gets interesting the more you read. The harem members are have different personalities whi is one of the most important factor. This novel has a good future if the author continues with the same quality of chapters.

Great work fellow daoist. As a fellow aithor I am really impressed with the ability of the author to write. There is a good balance in thia story, not too sweet, not too dark. I also like the MC's personality, who likes women but is not a spineless man who gets led around by a woman just because she is pretty. Over all I wish the updates keep coming, and i quote : Just like BooBs, may thay be everpresent and plenty!

I really don't feel like reading this story further. The mc is not likeable, story is full of cliches, and everything goes towards a completely obvious path, so no suspense on this story at all.

It's easily predicted and he got too comfy around and what about his father revenge he is not at all brooding and story is good but on the way it was beyond gone it's reunion is so idiotic

just bad story is just full of cliches and plot devices the author took from other stories no originality only good part about the novel was that the names weren't Chinese like most novels of this genre. Doesn't help that that the author added what might as well be a passive to force the mc to be some white knight that has to save everyone he comes across and sparing trash just to so they can repeatedly cause problems later.

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Here we have another typical reincarnation novel, but who am I kidding you wouldn't be here, if you don't love them. MC: Smart MC, kind of evil since he got betrayed (logical) HAREM: Feels kind of forced at times (no he doesn't r*pe them), just that the relationships just... appear. BAMM New girlfriend. But this is only the case with the first two or three girls after which it gets a more natural feel WORLD: Can't say too much (would spoil some stuff if I did), but it's creative and has elements you don't see that often. CONCLUSION: Great novel I would highly recommend (and already have).

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It's a good novel, has a simple plot which is easy to follow, Keep up the good work.........................................................

It's actually fine if you want to combine all the regular cliches and what not. But could you at least think it out? This could have been much better.