Immortal With A System?
Author: DrEver
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Akemi was the most powerful immortal of another world. Why did I say "was"? Oh because he's been reincarnated into the body of a powerless 15 year old high school boy named Lian Xu, after being betrayed by his best friend Toru. Upon waking up into his new body Akemi saw a strange window that called him a "player" that only he can see. Follow Akemi as he is reborn into a new world where Lian Xu has been abandoned, used and mistreated by everyone, a world where the strong are respected and the weak are thrown away, What will Akemi the former immortal do?
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The only problem i have is hpdate time. Other than that everything is fine. Honeslty I can only tell you to keep updating, soon you will get recognized. This is really good compared to some other series I have seen.
While largely similar to solo leveling that is not a bad thing as sometimes the old saying ‘if it ain’t broke don’t fix it’ the plot is developing nicely but, with some typos I cannot give it a higher writing quality. I hope the author can keep up the good work and I am looking forward go how the story continues.
this is a good story and the way the story is advancing is entrancing, basically a good book to read and relax
Just started reading this novel and wow all I can say is its amazing. Only issue I have is chapter being published twice a week but the quality does match up to it. If you can increase the upload shcedule. Overall though I’m hooked keep up the amazing work!
5 Stars! Keep up the good work!
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