if the author does make it a fine mature harem novel then let's try making it best there is, if not atleast top 10, so fans come and give your power stone and make it the best
6 years ago
7
Chaotic_Winter
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6 years ago
5
OFFLINE23
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6 years ago
4
Melshan
Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender.
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6 years ago
4
memberberry
I read the author's monologue and totally disagree. As? My fanfic sucks, but since it's a fanfic, okay?
I love OP but it has to make sense.
Praise be to Saitama Sensei.
6 years ago
3
Nut
Bland and boring, nothing really unqiue. The story just like any other bad generic fanfic.
A mary sue character that just went 0-100 in an instant.
0 ******* in any scenes.
Simplistic character who dosent really have a thought process and just go scene to scene.
Bad grammar.
And female sidechicks who might as well be any random female due to a lack of personality or if there were just the typical generic anime bimbo
The first few chapter have very little or no world building or characther, and it only goes down hill from there
Really dont get why the review rated it so high.
6 years ago
3
LawLife
Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors!
Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors!
Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors!
6 years ago
3
Ove1230
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6 years ago
3
EldridSmith
The problem with this is he SEVERELY changes the characters personalities, and ruins certain elements of the one piece world that shouldn't be changed.
6 years ago
2
DeadlyRuin
Neeeeedddd MOOOOOOAAAAAARRRRRR!!!!!!!😏😏😏😏😏 One of my most hated novels because it doesn’t have enough chapters lol. Also the author uses am instead of I’m which kinda annoys me but overall I LOVE IT 😍
6 years ago
2
Aizen_Sosuke
I hope author-san to explain more about the ability of the mc, how much stronger he is now? rear admiral?vice-admiral?accurate admiral?...
I'm looking forward the bounty and Garp face when he see the video.
6 years ago
2
aborotob
very good story!!!
i really like one piece!!!
hope you can keep up the work.
i am looking forward to how this story continues.
dont drop it!!!!!!!
6 years ago
2
EmporioBella
good novel.
i like OP mc.
keep up the work.
thanks.
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6 years ago
2
WN_grdy_mthr_fker
Really well written novel. i would highly recommend it... its so good i almost don't want to read it chapter by chapter and let it accumulate them and Bench watch them at once but i just cant wait for the next chapter.. also i am loving the speed of chapters being released
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if the author does make it a fine mature harem novel then let's try making it best there is, if not atleast top 10, so fans come and give your power stone and make it the best
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Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................😍
I read the author's monologue and totally disagree. As? My fanfic sucks, but since it's a fanfic, okay? I love OP but it has to make sense. Praise be to Saitama Sensei.
Bland and boring, nothing really unqiue. The story just like any other bad generic fanfic. A mary sue character that just went 0-100 in an instant. 0 ******* in any scenes. Simplistic character who dosent really have a thought process and just go scene to scene. Bad grammar. And female sidechicks who might as well be any random female due to a lack of personality or if there were just the typical generic anime bimbo The first few chapter have very little or no world building or characther, and it only goes down hill from there Really dont get why the review rated it so high.
Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors! Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors! Great work! More chapters please! And please don’t drop it like the other authors!
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The problem with this is he SEVERELY changes the characters personalities, and ruins certain elements of the one piece world that shouldn't be changed.
Neeeeedddd MOOOOOOAAAAAARRRRRR!!!!!!!😏😏😏😏😏 One of my most hated novels because it doesn’t have enough chapters lol. Also the author uses am instead of I’m which kinda annoys me but overall I LOVE IT 😍
I hope author-san to explain more about the ability of the mc, how much stronger he is now? rear admiral?vice-admiral?accurate admiral?... I'm looking forward the bounty and Garp face when he see the video.
very good story!!! i really like one piece!!! hope you can keep up the work. i am looking forward to how this story continues. dont drop it!!!!!!!
good novel. i like OP mc. keep up the work. thanks. ...............................................................................................................
Really well written novel. i would highly recommend it... its so good i almost don't want to read it chapter by chapter and let it accumulate them and Bench watch them at once but i just cant wait for the next chapter.. also i am loving the speed of chapters being released