Well, this is something I write on a whim. To relax from my main fic. If you have problems with that? Don't read and save me the trouble and stress from reading your hate comments about why low quality? why no effort? why lolis? why this why that. I just wanna relax and write what I want damnit. Is it that hard to ask for?
There is no clear path where it go and a wish fulfilment type of fic?
MC not human obviously. But super OP and can stomp anyone because he is after all secretly a 12th Dimensional Eldritch God.
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The spelling and grammar is fine, but everything about the story feels off. Here we have a 12th-dimensional eldritch god, and yet he's being treated like a mere pet. It's perplexing; the story has a promising concept, but the execution of the storytelling leaves much to be desired.
Nice concept but it reads like a crack fic. Also the mc is generic af, basically ur average human in a 12th dimensional cat but I don’t think the author really knows what he’s talking about with his whole 12th dimensional thing so for now he’s just a cat with shadow powers. Average Dxd wishfulment fic so far.
For those who like this type of novel, this must be wonderful. But I don't particularly like it very much.😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐
Good story and decent grammar ,but mc is a pedo 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢
Waiting for more Honkai ✔ Harem ✔ OP Mc ✔ Anti Hero MC ✔ Cute Waifus ✔
The story feels off. It's not bad or anything, but the interactions and world-building feels strange. It doesn't seem like it is written in DXD and yet it is.
i find it hillarious that the mc is a cat. how embarassing must it be for someone to die to a smal black cat? the gramma is not bat in my eyes, pretty easy to read. and the building of the story is also good.
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you know it's kinda ironic that I see this fic as soon as I've just watched Kris allegations.
Yo digo que es muy buena historia, me molesta que esté rompiendo la cuarta pared a cada rato, pero es una opinión personal y no lo hace tanto como por molestar, sino que de vez en cuando con intervalos entre cada vez, la historia está muy buena es comedia porque otra cosa no puede ser,el harem parece más adoptando niñas que un harem para mí no es un problema a mí no me gusta el harem pero hay gente que se molesta y mejor les pongo una advertencia en caso de que no les guste que no sea harem,dice que es secreta su identidad como dios de la doceava dimensión pero más o menos como en la mitad de la historia todo el mundo lo sabe, yo en lo personal considero esta una muy buena historia no va a ser de mi top 10 pero sí de mi top 50
the author is very interactive with his story which i like this a story which we must not take seriously and just enjoy it the one's who don't like it are either fools or they like rats. (i hope you well author)
The grammar was not the best but readable, anyway thank you for the Fanfic
I keep seeing this author, and unknowingly, I've read 3 or 4 of his fics(or, I've started to read). One thing all of them have in common is that they are quite interesting in the first 20 or so chapters. The Mc does show signs of being a sick degenerate, but he's controlled and it doesn't fell bad to read. After chapter 20 or so, it's like all brakes are off. Also, another thing that quite annoys me in fanfiction is that the authors don't fact-check their knowledge. If it was some obscure fandom like an old game or something it could be understood, but for DxD, every single fact is barely a google search away.
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Cool story but the dialogue could be better. Character interactions feel too scripted sometimes. Like a theater play.