Fate Ruler Of Death

Firstly, I only made it to chapter 5. I Must say that you did well on writing this fic, but. It wasn't for me, for starter's, it was Very very uncharacteristic for Ainz to do most of the things he did on the chapters that I have seen so far. And as far as I know Ainz is a Very Very cautious person bordering paranoia. So yeah that's that. Secondly, the way he thinks and interact. that's what bothers me the most, as you have said in the early chapter that he has "Conquered" the new world. But he Acts as if he hadn't Conquered anything before, like he doesn't show the Overlord like ruler he is. instead he has this disconnect with his Overlord self, and from what I have read on the LN of Overlord, he has Fully accepted his Overlord self. And mind you he hasn't even completed his Conquest in the new world, but he already accepted his human self and his Overlord self. but in this fic it's a mess when you compare it to the current Ainz of the LN and this fic Ainz. thirdly, I just genuinely dislike the way you're portraying him as a Subservient of sort in this Fic. I just don't ever see Ainz going that low. btw I think I've seen this fic before in Fanfiction. don't know why I get the feeling like I've read it before, anyways it was a good run for me, sadly it's just not for me. I hope this Review doesn't offend you in any way, if it do I apologise. have a nice day ^^/

You made the alignment of ain’t neutral evil but instead of acting evil he is beta / good. Totally breaks the character for me...

It is very interesting and gives me a side of Ainz that I never knew was there. It is honestly a new concept that I have never read before, Ainz in fate world. Good luck.

ok imma be truthfull i wabted to give .a one star review because you totally destroyed everything ainz is and that is something i dont really tolerate anyway but i cant because youre grammar is good updating stability decent and world background acceptable anyway you now know my real opinion about this book

Okay so this novel for me isn't great as I love overlord and this isn't that. Everyone saying oh but he was human and if you take away nazarick etc then he was a nice guy. Yes, he may be... however, we at least I didn't watch the show because he was a nice guy. I watched it because he was a badass, he had nazarick, his servants etc. Basically, if you like cannon Ainz you won't like this story. He is a beta good guy... completely breaking his character tbh.

It's decent fanfic and you should definitely try it out for yourself. However, I myself am not really up for this as the author makes Ainz out to actually care about strangers' feelings when he is undead and should be apathetic to them.

Character butchering at its finest... Character butchering at its finest... Character butchering at its finest... Character butchering at its finest... Character butchering at its finest

Dang, this **** is really good!! Now there's some who understands me!!! after all those years of searching some fate series that's actually good, now here it is!!! A GODDAMN GOOD FANFIC!!! AAHAHAHA!!!! But to be honest, though, I would like to see Ainz and Shirou fights. fighting for Sakura. Will the hero wannabe ****er I going to win? Or is it the Overwhelmingly Overpowered God of Death? .. .. Well, even if you don't do that, THIS SHIT IS STILL MOTHER FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!

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This would have been a good fic if you would have just wrote it as a SI, bc that is not Ainz bruh........................................................

I'm enjoying reading this novel so far. So author please don't drop this novel yet. The writing is not bad. I'm not good at giving opinion or review so don't mind me hehe. Good luck author!!!

Story is good, grammar could use some work. Not enough Overlord fanfiction. Thanks for writing one.

This is a personal opinion, and I can’t tell others not to read this novel, others can enjoy this novel but I hated every chapter, could not get past chapter 10. These are the cons of this story: -The protagonist isn’t Ainz, just a rip-off character that is a beta pathetic MC. Ainz is 1 of my top 5 protagonists, and I have read Overlord LN’s three times, the manga, and watched the anime several times. This character is not Ainz, his undead trait is not there, some readers, and author says they don’t want a character that has no emotions but Ainz has emotions, it’s just his emotions are negated after a certain degree, and if you can’t write Ainz like how he is, then don’t write him! This Ainz is also so judgemental that he judges others so quick, he calls someone master, he kneels, he has unfounded not acting arrogance, is not cautious (Ainz is 1 of the most cautious protagonists ever!), is a complete hypocrite (He is a hypocrite but not in the same way this author makes him), makes vows easily, and is an idiot but if course everyone including author says he’s smart because thats what the author wants! Character assassination. -There are many contradictions. -So fast paced, and so convenient for the protagonist. Sakura accepts Ainz as her family in a few paragraphs/minutes perhaps seconds, and in less than 2 chapters will fight in the 4th holy grail war to ‘save’ Ainz. (Make it so Ainz does not leave this her.) -Characters believe Ainz so easily, they can’t think he’s lying, and so many characters aren’t properly portrayed, not just Ainz! -Kills other servants so easily, no drama, no restriction of power, just a op yet beta kind MC pretty much. -There is much more in just 10 chapters but yeah, it’s mostly about the protagonist, he is not Ainz! The other characters are also not completely portrayed well, and everything goes to easily, to conventions, and to fast.