Can we really decide our fate? Or is it just a string pulled since birth?
Kevin KOERSOMBRE is a young and naïve boy, son of a village chief, living a peaceful and eventless life. Until particular one night...
Abandoned by his own parents, and betrayed by the one he trusted the most, his life will turn into a living nightmare;
in a world constantly threatened by the longinus: harbingers of death, lifeforms as ancients as the gods which scare even those immortal beings, wielding an ancient and destructive power: The REGAS.
After being betrayed and hated, after everything he will have faced; will he still save his world, SHCAMERIN, a world governed by the goddess MEETIA and her heroes? Or will he participate in its downfall with the LONGINUS?
I am so disappointed. This is so good novel yet no one bothers to read it, appreciate it. So less views..... The novel here is kinda new for me though i have read hundreds of novels... it is refreshing, realistic but kinda dark. So much happens to a 7 year old kid. His father abandons him while escaping enemies thinking since he is a child they wont kill him as he would have an advantage as a hostage, also he doesnt know any secrets. He gets betrayed by his caretaker who is a spy. He gets roughed up every now and then, badly brutally beaten up, life on the edge..... never has happy moments... used by others like a pawn... All this happening to him when he is only 7 yrs old, currently 10 yrs..... Writing quality is good, very less errors. story development is awesome but kinda dark and realistic, updates are a little irregular.... MC is a kid, a runt, betrayed, wants to prove himself.... his personality is acceptable coz he was sheltered kid for 6 yrs and then suddenly all the ugliness is thrown to him though he acts too tough for a kid.... Other characters are also realistic with each having own sad back story. Not much is known about world background but from what i read looks like it will be epic and i guess it will war on god level if this book continues. I hope people appreciate this work coz it really is very good. Hope author keeps writing more frequently and regularly
This novel is top notch quality, gives off the pro author vibe. From the extraordinary character development to the wondrous world building, this novel is just excellent. I would totally recommend this :D
Author I am loving your novel I've read to chapter 120 but some areas stands out in your story the annoys me a bit. The part that annoys me is the Mc choices, he refuses at times to use his full power were it can help him avoid trouble or escape. He lets his emotions rule over him a lot, this is explained by his past but it still doesn't feel like he is gaining control over it or improving his control over his emotions. The novel is good and i would hate for you to stop or quit, keep up the great work.
MC is way too dumb and too emotional I can't read this book. How can you make him have a personality so unbalanced like pick one and stick to it.
Reveal Spoiler
Don't give up, sir. Your books is filled with your passion for it. As long as you continue to write, success will follow. Also, I suggest you go premium on this book. Webnovel helps promote premium books with stable updates.
Great story, this novel is within my top 5. Out of the tens of novels I read on this platform, this is top 1. Good luck and cheers author, I really wish to see a full/completed novel of this quality.
First this story has already 100 plus chapters which is a great way for binge reading. The story plot is interesting. The narratives are easy to read and can be perceived well by the readers. The world background is written well. Overall, this book is a great read! Great work author!
This story has an interesting prologue. Even with just the start, this is very hooking. The narration was legit and easy to read. With finishing touches, this will rise above the rest. All in all, a wonderful job creating an awesome novel!
Yep. Its good. It has decent start, intriguing characters, and the first dialogue in the prologue just blew me off by an instant. This book's got potential. 👍👍👍
story is a 6 year old that has been betrayed by family, can't feel anything and expects people to treat him like an adult or he threatens them (with no capability). so a worthless child that insists that he is an adult.
Noice .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
honestly can't even get into this can't pronounce half the names the full capitalization of last names is annoying if your not going to make the first names the same it's just an overall rough read
I kept my word and leave my review. Please take a look at my book. I want to point out that I haven't read all of them because there are so many chapters First of all, I was impressed by your writing language. You really expressed yourself very well. The structure of the world and the processing of the characters are really nice. The episodes seem a little long but never uncomfortable. I recommend you to read it.