Our Happiness

Our Happiness

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Author: basementerz
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A little boy was quietly crying to himself in the corner of his room. His mind went blank. The thought of his mom's words before she left him alone kept playing in his mind. His mom died in a tragic road accident.



He was in sorrow knowing how he was badly bullied at school. every day he would show up in class with bruised eyes, wounds everywhere caused by his bullies.



That was the sad truth of his daily routine.



He was very disappointed. He hated himself.



He's tired of thinking about the things happening around him to the point that he fell asleep in the lonely, filled with the cold corner of the room.



While he was deep in his sleep, he dreamt of a young girl coming towards him and protected him as if she was his angel. Unconsciously, he smiled.

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basementerz
basementerz

Hello readers! Before you read this book, I would like you to read this pinned review first. This is our first time ever writing a book in this platform and we really didn't expect that a lot of readers would actually read this book. Ah! Also, Basementerz is what we call ourselves as we have 4 people working together on creating this book. Writing Quality: English isn't our first language. However, since we have the skills to compose and read in English, we challenged ourselves to start writing a story in English because why not? Besides, English is one of the main language that lots of people use in this world. And on another note, if we ever have grammatical errors or spelling errors, please let us know. We would like to improve ourselves so that we can continue to give you guys the best experience whenever you read our book. Stability of Updates: Since we're still students, we are going to be busy with our studies and stuff however, we will try to make time so that we can update at least 3 to 4 chapters a week :) Story Development: If you're a fan of high school love story, you might like this book. We can assure you that this book would have a pretty interesting twist to it despite the amount of cliché scenes contained in it haha Character Design: We've designed each characters so that they would perfectly match with their roles World Background: It's not as complicated to understand the setting of it since it is based on Modern Fiction. Also, if you're kind enough, we would really appreciate it if you can support this book by leaving the chapters or paragraphs some comments, vote with your power stone, add it to your library or leave a review. We are interested on hearing your thoughts on our book. Lastly, we hope that you have a great experience with our book as it is our main goal to satisfy our readers as much as we could. We also appreciate the love from all of you so therefore we wanna thank you all for supporting! We treasure each and every one of your votes for this book. We will try our best to improve ourselves in the future through your help! Again, thank you so much for reading this book! :D

4 years ago
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Mel_Aniv
Mel_Aniv

This novel didn't failed to touch my heart. I have been captivated by the start and was hooked! A hidden gem for me! With right exposure to more readers, this will fare well in the future! Nice job!

4 years ago
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Y33tus_Maximus
Y33tus_Maximus

Reveal Spoiler

4 years ago
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WinterQween
WinterQween

The book is fairly simple with straight forward characters so its an enjoyable light read. The only criticism I would have is that the chapters feel quite short without allowing for the charcters to develop within them before going to the next. However, there is great potential and hoping the writer keeps going!

4 years ago
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Wolfgirl1215
Wolfgirl1215

Nice work! The plot is good, and easy to follow. The characters are also very well scripted and likable, and the chapters are at a really nice length too, not too long that you lose interest, and not too short either. A very enjoyable read! Would reccomend if you are looking for some light reading and romance!

4 years ago
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SeverusMagicus
SeverusMagicus

Good story, author did well when writing the story line. The characters are well explained and there are many details in the story which makes the book good.

4 years ago
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Mila_Alaia
Mila_Alaia

Well well well!!! A high school romance. It is sweet and adorable. Love the flow of story. A feel good kinda novel. Keep up the grt work authors🤝🏻 Cheers✨

4 years ago
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Ak02
Ak02

So nice. I love this wonderful story! Keep up your good work, author! 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥😀😀😀

4 years ago
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d_elfe
d_elfe

A high school romance for youngsters. I might be a little old for this, but it is refreshing, and simple, and you go with the flow as you read how those high school students wraps their minds and hands together.

4 years ago
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DyaAran
DyaAran

A high school romance! High school romances are pure and vibrant. I find them adorable and interesting. This story got everything needed for a high school love story. But this is also unique. I came to know that the writers of this story are a group of students. I think that's interesting. Will keep supporting you girls. Good luck with your novel!!!

4 years ago
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mozza_mello
mozza_mello

Ayee this is a great read! :D The writing itself is awesome, with little to no errors hehe! That's amazing, author! :D I love the relaxing feel of this story, and the pace is also perfect, making it a smoooth feel-goodsies read! The characters all have personalities, so that's a plus! :D Especially the ML and the FL hehe! Sometimes some of the events feel a bit forced, but it okie :D Great job, author! <3

4 years ago
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87w
87w

The short chapters made it easy to read! I prefer if there’s more conversation between the characters tho. With more conversation, I think the characters will be more flashed out! Keep up the good work Author!

4 years ago
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The_divine_oracle
The_divine_oracle

I like the short chapters. It's like constantly peering into a small part of their lives. The characters are also interesting. The simple and easy to relate atmosphere is a definite plus. Keep up the good work.

4 years ago
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Jo_J
Jo_J

Four of YOU - you are doing really great work! I admire the cooperation ;) The story is interesting, the plot is captivating and the characters expressive. I like Charlie very much and the fact, that despite his very difficult childhood, he remained a normal young man... Wish you guys (4ofu) endless inspiration and a lot of great ideas!

4 years ago
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leeroycgna
leeroycgna

Very nice clean writing so far, dialogue is sharp and to the point and pleasant to read. I love the short and sweet chapters, I'm sure we all Noah (know a) bully ;) pun intended. Keep up the good work!

4 years ago
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