Our Happiness
A little boy was quietly crying to himself in the corner of his room. His mind went blank. The thought of his mom's words before she left him alone kept playing in his mind. His mom died in a tragic road accident.
He was in sorrow knowing how he was badly bullied at school. every day he would show up in class with bruised eyes, wounds everywhere caused by his bullies.
That was the sad truth of his daily routine.
He was very disappointed. He hated himself.
He's tired of thinking about the things happening around him to the point that he fell asleep in the lonely, filled with the cold corner of the room.
While he was deep in his sleep, he dreamt of a young girl coming towards him and protected him as if she was his angel. Unconsciously, he smiled.
This novel didn't failed to touch my heart. I have been captivated by the start and was hooked! A hidden gem for me! With right exposure to more readers, this will fare well in the future! Nice job!
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The book is fairly simple with straight forward characters so its an enjoyable light read. The only criticism I would have is that the chapters feel quite short without allowing for the charcters to develop within them before going to the next. However, there is great potential and hoping the writer keeps going!
Nice work! The plot is good, and easy to follow. The characters are also very well scripted and likable, and the chapters are at a really nice length too, not too long that you lose interest, and not too short either. A very enjoyable read! Would reccomend if you are looking for some light reading and romance!
Good story, author did well when writing the story line. The characters are well explained and there are many details in the story which makes the book good.
Well well well!!! A high school romance. It is sweet and adorable. Love the flow of story. A feel good kinda novel. Keep up the grt work authors🤝🏻 Cheers✨
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A high school romance! High school romances are pure and vibrant. I find them adorable and interesting. This story got everything needed for a high school love story. But this is also unique. I came to know that the writers of this story are a group of students. I think that's interesting. Will keep supporting you girls. Good luck with your novel!!!
Ayee this is a great read! :D The writing itself is awesome, with little to no errors hehe! That's amazing, author! :D I love the relaxing feel of this story, and the pace is also perfect, making it a smoooth feel-goodsies read! The characters all have personalities, so that's a plus! :D Especially the ML and the FL hehe! Sometimes some of the events feel a bit forced, but it okie :D Great job, author! <3
The short chapters made it easy to read! I prefer if there’s more conversation between the characters tho. With more conversation, I think the characters will be more flashed out! Keep up the good work Author!
I like the short chapters. It's like constantly peering into a small part of their lives. The characters are also interesting. The simple and easy to relate atmosphere is a definite plus. Keep up the good work.
Four of YOU - you are doing really great work! I admire the cooperation ;) The story is interesting, the plot is captivating and the characters expressive. I like Charlie very much and the fact, that despite his very difficult childhood, he remained a normal young man... Wish you guys (4ofu) endless inspiration and a lot of great ideas!
Very nice clean writing so far, dialogue is sharp and to the point and pleasant to read. I love the short and sweet chapters, I'm sure we all Noah (know a) bully ;) pun intended. Keep up the good work!
I loved this story from the cover. I'm really hooked to see where the author goes with the story. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Heads up! The authors did a great work with this story. I enjoy every bit of characterization here. Story development flows really smoothly. World background is written well. Stability of updates, I see no problem here. Keep it up, authors! This is definitely going to stay in my collections. Greatly recommended to those who want refreshing school romance stories 💞