The Ancient Monster
In the snowy mountains of the northern region, A kingdom exist that conquered many territories with their mighty hero.
She was the strongest woman alive and serve the kingdom for her whole life.
But she was betrayed, After conquering the last kingdom in the Northern Regions. She was betrayed by her so called comrades, They drugged her and threw her into the prison for execution.
Her family was executed in front of her, she could hear their screams. She devoted her life to the so called god but she was labeled as a demon.
Her faith wavered and the Devil whispered into her ears corrupting her soul. The Devil told her the truth about the experiences of her family before they were killed.
She was called a Naive, Innocent, and Idiotic although she was the strongest hero in the north. She was called a pathetic little girl who knows nothing and devoted her whole life for a God that would not notice her.
She broke down after hearing the insults of the Devil which was mostly true. She just wanted for her suffering to stopped which cause the Devil to take something that cause her to suffer.
She was burned at the stake alive by the kingdom she was loyal and the angry mob that kept cursing and swearing at her and her family. She was disappointed at the humans that she once tried to protect.
So to end her suffering, The Devil took her Emotions and throws her to the Primordial World. She must survive there and raised her power into something unimaginable.
Then She was turn into a monster.
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The MC won't try to be a human anymore, Although she would get a humanoid form in the later chapters. She won't try to pretend as if she was still a human.
Be warned that the MC is a monster, Moral Codes of Humanity disappeared on her when she turned into a monster.
This is a story about an Evil MC so don't expect that MC to follow the moral guidelines of Humanity. The MC still has the flaws of being a human and if you want to know this would be her flaws. -Underestimating her enemies(Underestimating enemies is a bad thing) -Being Greedy(Too much greed would be turn into punishment) -Leaving a lot of Mess(Which would result of her enemies being born, And this enemies could be called the heroes) -Arrogant(I like to think that she is arrogant) -Selfish(She is Selfish, She ate a lot of fish without giving anyone)jk -Psychopath(The Makings of a psycho) -Evil(Evil) This flaws would slowly disappear as time passes in the story probably due to experience. As this is the primordial world which is full of things that is considered nonsense. The MC would have to adapt and during her time as a weak monster would be her most Evil time. [I am Shameless for Reviewing myself] I would also like you to report all misspellings so that I would able to fix it.
I love Elizabeth she is one of the best Female Protagonist. She was at first troubled with memories but she was somewhat fixed to an extent. The chapter updates are well they blow my mind because as a fellow author I know how hard it can be writing chapters so I respect you Author-san. Also I really like those THICC mentors they are cool, strong and cold/nice depending on who they are with. But that is all for my review👍😁
I really like this book keep up the good work.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Brilliant story,amazing concept and background for the character with lots of potential for future development. Don’t know whether or not the author has drop this, it would be a shame if they have. If not it would be nice to see some more updates in the future, keep carrying on with the great work.👍👌
I really like the story until you decided to send her to another world in just 40 chapters and it was jus getting good. really disappointed
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this is somewhat like a revenge story where our FL is emotionless but instead of making everyone pay she will become the strongest person she could be the main character here is emotionless so she is bit [cold-blooded] But Anyhow I really like the story and I think its really awesome So if your really interested a bit I recommend you this story and give it a try 😎👉👉 CHECK IT OUT !!!!
Some gramatical issues but the story is amazing and very engaging. This is definitely worth a read.
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I love this book I love the premise the ideas and the character development there are a few grammatical errors however the overall enjoyment I receive from this book is more than enough to ignore them completely
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Please dont drop this novel i love how themain character is not chained by what normal people consider typical rules of conduct most novels also subvert normal morals but they try to put a cover on it saying it is for the greater good or somthing like that.
Keep up with the good work..................................................................................................................
good story line,character,world building,and I want more chapter..............................................................................