Awakened As A Dungeon Core?
What happens when a normal man awakens in a world of magic and monsters? What if he awakens as a gemstone that can't move, eat, or communicate but is somehow alive? What happens when this stone learns to cast magic and create rooms, to bring life to monsters of its own and defend itself from invaders? This is the story of that mans journey from a small one room tunnel to a magnificent challenge to the universe.
Chapters range from 1k-1.5k words usually! First time writing this type of novel but always wanted to try so any feedback helps!
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well I got tricked in the first 19 chapters that this is a good novel but from chapter 20 it gets trashy the mc is a absolute idiot like come man is the mc the mc or his subordinates or intruders because they get seen more and decides everything for him even things about him self
Good book, interesting view as a Dungeon Core, Mc is a bit naive and stupid at times, but still a pretty good MC. Not much lore yet, but there's seems to be some coming up, recently established ranking system for the bosses of his Dungeon, although no ranks for the normal mobs yet I believe there will be. Interesting take on how when creatures or humanoids die in the Dungeon, he Becomes able to make them. Although there is no summoning of his own type of creatures, he is able to spawn in multipul copys of anything that dies within his Dungeon minus any intelligence they had when alive. Although the MC is a bit late on the uptake that he is a rock/Dungeon Core & not a human. I believe he will be able to grow soon enough to become a Ruthless Dungeon Core. Book is very similar to those Demon ruling a Dungeon type Tropes with a bit of a twist where it's the core itself, so it's not the enemy of humans. So far, I'd say this book is 8/10, but if/when the MC becomes more ruthless it has the possibility to be a 10/10
Very good glad your back, keep up the good work
At 1st I like the story but in the main character start to become way too nice.
It has a dungeon vibe, but thats all. The writing is weird sometimes, with typos there and there, the characters are bidimensional and the story goes too fast, making any evolution in characters akward. The main character is a secondary character and the story is writen in first person in present, a curious choice, but also harder to use. To be fair I only read a third of the book, mainly because a got bored. Is very light, but this factor is more of a personal taste. The main character is also extremly naive, and aparently everyone is. If you want a light non complex dungeon "theme" novel, this would do the trick, but not very good otherwise.
The concept of the novel was good till the MC transformed into a total Little Pony Naive Simp, the Dungeon was a dungeon for the first 5chaps and then turned into a typical employee slave... This was a total disappointment, and for the great top of the crop, the novel is already being dropped little by little. Don't waste your time here, the Author took a very easy and good concept (dungeon maker, dungeon core being) and ruined it in just 20 chaps.
If the dungeon ever gets a revamp I think it would be cool to have style transition floors that make sence like the castle, for example you could do a mining cave -> mining cave -> underground pool leading to an water themed level (beach, underwater, whatever) transition to a jungle/forest -> dead forest area -> dealands/desert -> volcano -> mountains -> snowy mountains -> cloud area
Why is my name in another book hahahahahha what is going on
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it's a good read to be honest I wasn't sure if I'd like it but now I'm worried it got dropped since there's been no update in 5 months
great read so far, looking forward to how it may develop
Really enjoying this story! The world and description of the monsters is great and refreshing! All types of skills, powers, etc.
Please don’t drop this till 1000 + chapters really good development so far!!!! Keep up the hard work
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honestly i dont like kyle much but it doesnt focus on him too much which i do like also the plenty of perspectives is really cool pretty rare to see it so you get everyones perspective which i really like honestly i just hope this novel doesnt get abandoned like many others because its pretty good