My Naruto Dream

this is probably the most boring naruto fanfic I have ever read ok it started already but after that it went down hill he befriends naruto which I dont like as befriending naruto beings more cons than pros but the author clearly doesn't know the cons example why isn't the third Hokage suspicious that naruto the person everyone in the village hates suddenly has a friend huh huge plot hole and when naruto starts crying because he gets a friend he starts crying as well and has to hold it back my guy your a grown as man why you crying and you'll say oh hes a child hes psychologically a grown man so dumb then he trains but hide his strength like W.Ť.F no likes a mc that hides his strength then when he is asked whats his dream he says to find a woman and settle down and that was when I drop did he forget about the akatsuki and pain and you live in the shinobi world a world where kids are sent to war a world where beasts that can destroy a village roam the land and place where I guy that was supposed to be dead fights 80% of the shinobi alliance pull out a meteor from nowhere fight all the kages konoha previous kages the tailed beasts and the protagonist and only got killed because of plot armour and you want to settle down and relax drop grammar isn't bad but the idea and plot is trash read some naruto fanfictions and come back because this is not it well creation is hard I wish you the best but 2 stars for me

i love this fanfic! oc is definitely a crybaby but a strong crybaby! this is quite similar to a fanfic I have read before but better since the dramas were kept at minimum. good pace for a fanfic and finally, I love how you made the character show his true feelings. unlike those novels that think being cold or indifferent is always cool. hehe. good job and keep it up pls!

man it's another one of those stories where the character will hug the legs of the original protagonist and follow behind like a loyal dog .

Ngl, I don't have alot to say as I'm a man of not many words plus there isn't alot of chapters, however I can say this is a really good book and quite similar yet unique to cannon. The MC doesn't have any cheat except the knowledge of the NarutoVerse and his intelligence. The story has good pacing, writing is good and an almost perfect blend of action, comedy and emotional scenes? I'm really excited to see how far our MC will go and how far our dear author is willing to take this (I'd be surprised if he gets to war ark as alot of authors drop the novel even when the readers are enjoying the story. Just realized the story has entered shippuden despite it being only 26 chapters.. As I said, good pacing and writing cause I didn't even realize.. Keep up the good work

I have read 44 chapters and this fic is a complete disappointment. stupid plot, stupid jokes for kindergarten. idiotic relationships with other people, from the very beginning you imposed Tsunade on us like a child, then idiotically got rid of her, and now you've given it to Jiraiya altogether, I swear I hate you. one of the dumbest and trash fanfiction about Naruto!

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nicely done :D but need moaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar

stupid good honestly my favorite naruto fanfic I've read with good power progression not up in your face Immediate op bs.