A Wild Queen Of Hell
A wild Grayfia "Queen of succubus" and Satan of Draconic Deux capturing pokemon all over the multiverse.Some random guy die from some random yeet and get some random wishes.Reincernated as Grayfia Lucifuge.I just got some inspiration and wrote whatever comes to my mind.I am not good at English so some Grammer might be wrong.if you tell me I will fix it.Oh And all characters except some self insert characters are all belong to their original owner.
Cover photo is taken from Google Credit to original owner
I am going to delete idiotic reviews that doesn't please me to keep my sanity stable.I welcome all advice in any forms except some reviews that is simply roasting me for the sake of it.I ain't no saint.If you don't like this book, Don't read this.It is very simple solution.
5 star from me take it ........................................................................................................................................................................................
Writing quality 2 stars, stability of updates 5 stars for the time being and the rest is 4 stars. This review will be mainly about the writing quality since it is a glaring flaw that would drive away many potential readers and the most of the flaws are something that can be fixed with a bit of effort. The author doesn't misspell the names and does not mix up the pronouns(he/she). The writing itself, however is too mmm....direct? It felt a bit like how a child would speak. A child would say something like "I want to eat food" while an adult would say something like "Oh, I'm feeling a bit hungry". While they mean the same, they are totally different to read. Try to use some conjunctions too. I noticed that you have a lot of sentences, or rather, full stops. Try to lengthen the sentences a little and connect with each other. I also noticed that you have quite a lot of errors with capital letters at the wrong places. This may Seem insignificant But it Is Actually annoying To read in The Long Term. See what happened there? Try to fix that if possible. Also, please, please don't hesitate to use a space after EVERY full stop, comma or question mark. It doesn't cost you money to press that space bar one every now and then y'know. Above mentioned are all minor mistakes but when they're stuck together, it makes things quite annoying to read. 3.8 for a total score. Well, since there aren't many reviews, I'll be a bit more lenient with the gradings.
What grammar is this my guy, The history itself is a 4.4 but the grammar is so bad it goes back to just a 3.0 .......................... ...
Although an early chapter is too boring for my taste, and difficult to read, at least in chapter 18 Author is improved from boring to not so boring. Chapter 23 is more decent to read, but in the next chapter started to degrade not so boring again, for the rest chapter is still pending because I'm sleepy, this story can be said only deserves 2 stars but because I'm a biased and generous man, take this 5 stars.
I relly like it.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
5 Star from me °
На данный момент мне нравится эта история! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
as a guy I'm have to give a bad review to actually like this there's got to be something wrong with a man mind to want to be reincarnated as a female
Hey are you still alive Author-San? .