Lin Fang, a person with a pretty face and no other positive traits finds his worldview turn completely upside down by the truth of his past and the gifts left behind by his Grandfather.
Follow him on his adventures as he grows from an immature, unlikeable and friendless loser to a strong, charismatic and caring man as he fights the whole world, meets new friends, makes new enemies and journeys towards the end of The Road Of God.
The story is good. I mean, if you replace the fact that I've heard about another MC from another story named Lin Feng, then yeah, the novel is pretty good. Advise: The novel has some things that I would like to help in. 1.) Dialogues should always be ".." don't just add in '...' its purrty weird and inconsistent occasionally. 2.) Synopsis should be ******, short, and tells everything about the story. However, urs is too short my friend. Make it a bit longer. 3.) Make a novel pic! or else people wouldn't even look at ur novel! (not me though, but still) Other than that, pretty much nothing? I think... Anyways, good luck with ur novel man!!!
Shameless self promotion, This plot came to me in the lonely nights of 2018 and I was kind of depressed. But I assure my reader that I will write the story to the best of my ability and if I do make a mistake or something is not not upto the mark please do tell me. I will try my best to RIGHT those wrongs. See the pun. RIGHT as correct and WRITE as in write, see, SEE. (^_^) No, you don't get it. Huh, you hurt my feelings.(! _ !)
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This story is very interesting and real timekiller. Loving the story development , just hope it updated faster, because it's a bit short. Hope to see more and keep it up.
The story so far is good......this is the first time i have seen the MC in an VRMMO to be on the evil side.....so its something new ;)................................................................
Here Is what I have seen till now in the novel Writing quality- quite good, there are a few errors here and there but the overall quality is great and doesn't really hamper the reading. Stability of updates- Quite stable, one chapter a day Story Development- The author has left a lot of mysteries in the story for us to think about like the abilities of the first female introduced in the story and the main character grows after each incident as well. Character Design- The design of the main character was quite confusing at first as he was quite contradicting, he was like a scared cat at first which was kind of, well not up to the mark but I would say that it his character stabilized quite a bit by the 35 having a strong and daring personality. World Background- One-word unbelievable, the background of the world from the leveling system(Even though it's quite similar to Night Ranger and one other story whose name I can't remember) to the background of the mc which we still have to find out. Conclusion- All in all, I find this novel a good read and wish the author the best of luck, plus all my power stones go to you for now. Keep the good work up. ;)
"Sigh" Another thief/rogue. While I don't dislike them I have reached my situation point, looking for a good mage storyline(non nec/warlock/shadow) Hope your story goes well, I will pass on it.
Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................😎
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