Against The Devil

Hello my fellow readers and writers, It is I... The one and only Anon22. So, I have been writing this book for at least two months and I think it's time I give a review about the book. For some of you that know about my first book, Single Wish, you guys would know that I've improved. Against The Devil (ATD), has two main characters, Andrew Wayne (inspired from Bruce Wayne, a.k.a Batman) and Silver Morningstar (inspired by Lucifer Morningstar, a.k.a The Devil). Now, I know, since Silver's surname is literally 'Morningstar', doesn't that mean that Silver would become the devil? Well... I'm obviously not going to give you guys spoilers. I'm going to leave you to your own thoughts. Now, let's get back to the review. ATD is a story about two male kids from two different planets. Andrew Wayne is from a planet that is extremely similar to ours. The main difference is that they are way more technologically advanced compared to Earth. Andrew's planet is called Technotopia and Silver's planet is called Nirvania. Now, Nirvania is a planet that is based on magic and cultivation. To be honest, Nirvania is extremely complex and I cannot write about it here or I'll spend the entire day here. Anyway, there is a war between Technotopia and Nirvania, with the Technotopians wanting to take control of Nirvania, and Nirvania are the ones defending their home. However, there is a lot more to this. Volume one of ATD is about Andrew, and it's short (only 15 chapters). Volume two is about Silver, and it's very long. Most of the story would be on Silver, but at some point, it would shift to Andrew alone, and then the story would be about Andrew and Silver at the same time. There is actually a lot in this story, but to mention everything would take too long. So, I'll just mention some things. Andrew and Silver were born in extremely rich and powerful homes. Silver is a Spartan. (Yes, there are Spartans in the book.) The story is going to be slow-paced. I don't want to rush the story or make either Silver or Andrew to advance through their power levels so easily. My MCs would suffer. I plan on making Silver have a harem, but Andrew would not have a harem. The cultivation system is somewhat complex, but I got inspiration from Lord of Mysteries and Paragon of Sin for the cultivation system. My MCs would suffer (I know I said this twice. I know why I'm saying it). And I think that's all. If you have any question to ask me, ask me and I'll do my best to reply them. Peace out!