Angel's Song: Requiem of the Dreams

i love this story, first of all it is a rare opportunity to see how the natives of a world would possibly react when "players" suddenly appeear in their world, the grammar quality is really high and in my opinion the world building is skillfully done and there is enough development to keep one interested but not overwhelming. aside from some of the minor "player" character the Char, design is well done leaving me wanting for more. (read over on the authors website (pdf))

it's entertain to read the otherside of the world from an natuve perspective instead of an invader aka players. Still have grammar issues but when you have leisure time, its not bad to read at your own time.

As of chapter 138: Interesting story, really needs an editor tho. Very intense action full of suspenseful dangerous situations that are way too much for my poor heart tbh. My favorite parts are the interactions between the characters outside the fighting though there isn't all that many. Anyway good job author-san ^.^