Ultimate Guiding System: Where It All Begins

Hello to everyone. I don't know where to start but I am very happy to know that there are some of you that gave good reviews and comments at my work. . I am sorry for some delay updates since it's hard for a 15 year old kid like me to come up with some plots and ideas for my next chapter. I am also very sorry for those wrong spelling since I am typing too fast sometimes that I even press the wrong letters. Well, this novel is not contracted so it will be free until I sign a contract. But I am just 15 years old right now and cannot sign a contract yet. So feel free to just read this story. I even wanted to put a lot of cool stuff but since it needs a development in the story, I need to take it slow. And the fact that I also need to deal with my studies right now and meet some 'expectations' makes it even hard for me to release three chapters a day. I think I could only max with two chapters but I will try to release in some days three or more chapters if i got an inspiration. I may not or may be the only 15 year old author but i feel like writing a novel is not limited to our own age. I bet that maybe there is some younger than me already writing their own novel. Again, thanks for giving me some good feedbacks. It made me motivated to write moooore!!!!!!! But feel free to comment any wrongs and error or any displeasure you see in any chapters. I still want tto improve and all of your judging would greatly help me in improving my writing skills. In the near future, I would become a better author with all the red inks you used to correct my errors. My path here never ends. I want challenges and some downsides to further hone my being. And I am expecting that from everyone. I am still new so please do take care of me .😊😊😊😊

Although there are many wrong spellings it can be change soon, the story development is quite addicting with its world background. This story don't have cliché events or scene which makes me like it, the characters personality is good.

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I just wanted to rate it 5 star since its good. That's all! No other word and just very very good!!! [ΦΦ] |`-----'| msoshsisnosnsosbsjnshsbssnksns in n

5 stars. This project is so good that you have to read it. Really man it's free now so take advantage of it! No for real. There are not many clichés or zero clichés in this novel, it feels good. The system is good and can be original. I won't say anything more but if you like system novels you can read it right now you will like it!

Great story but fix spelling.

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ONE OF MY FAVORITE NOVEL IN THE SITE. THIS IS DEFINITELY A GOD TIER NOVEL. I can't even believe that this talented author is only 15 years old.

I want to rate it 5 but there are two things that made it drop down to 4.6.... It would sometimes give us no update on some days... And the other thing is the spelling.. But overall, the story is good.

I want moooore!!! Ehem* I think I am lucky this time to stumble upon this story. It was good!! Just few fixing in some spellings and it was ready to go!