My Kingdom Fall

What a wonderful story you have here. I love the plot and all the twists and turns and all the different connections. The characters work so well together and I love the different atmosphere's you have with the different points in the story. The fight scenes are definitely my favorite because I love the way they struggle to win and sometimes the odds are against them and then they will be saved. It is a shame when a character dies but I think it is reasonable for the story so that it can progress. I do wish that we can see more background. I've noticed things that you talked about but didn't cover in detail. Maybe I'm just jumping the gun a bit. You always close the loop holes in the story and make it comprehensible for the readers. You also have very interesting characters and power scales. I can't wait til those develop deeper for the story.

Great start for a story. That was an amazing prologue. So much happened in it. I wonder where the next chapter will begin at. It's crazy how this is all going to circle back to them. I can tell there is going to be a lot of events that happen, I can not wait!

Amazing! Truly wonderful! I loved the themes and the different attitudes of the characters. There's so much that you have barely scratch the surface of. Seeing more of the gods will be awesome. And reading about the fates of the kingdoms, too!

I'm not much of a reader. My friend recommended this website to me and told me to explore a little. Man, I am grateful I found this story! All of the elements work together to create this wonderful story. Since this is only the prologue, there are many ways this story could go. I love just thinking about the different paths. I can not wait to see more!!!

I think this story has a well developed foundation that can easily be built upon. The characters are great and I love Phoenix. He is my favorite character so far.

I really enjoyed this story. Fantasy is my favorite genre of all time. I love the environment and the type of world that the story takes place in. It was a great prologue!

Dang! This was great! The plot is not clear, which I love. The more the story goes on the more the plot will be revealed! I loved the other story you wrote, The Never Ending Hallway, and this one is just as good or might even be better!

I really enjoyed this story. I can see a lot f potential with it. I love the different kingdoms and the many characters that can be explored the more the story is written. I can not wait for the next chapter of the story. Another great one!

I read the other reviews and there is not much more I could say about your novel. I like how you switch perspectives and we get to see how the different characters are doing. It is also nice because we get to see what is happening around the different kingdoms and areas.

I have recently just browsed this website. I somehow stumbled here. That was a good novel. I will stay posted on this story. I hope you keep writing it.

That was so so so great! I loved the whole dang story!!!! I thought it was amazing. I was not considering any of that. The whole plot is awesome. I got to tell you, you are an amazing writer!.

I loved the story. The prologue set up the plot very nicely and it followed a very straight forward path that was easy to understand. I loved the arcs and the different characters. Some of the death scenes were really sad and other parts of the story kept me on the edge of my seat. I could not stop reading once I started. The last few arcs were great, I did not expect the story to go where it went. But I loved the ending.