WPC #256 - Magic, Gold Winner
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Jeong-Hui, a teenager with no accomplishments in life, spends his days in solitude, living alone and gaming most of the day.
That is, until a world-shaking revelation descended on Earth.
The one proclaiming to be "God" informed humanity of their failure as a species, and that Armageddon would begin.
However, as a means of giving those worthy of continuing on a chance, "God" introduced the "Armageddon Game", bestowing a special system onto every person of the world.
The system grants each player the abilities of Angels, reminiscent of an RPG as experience, stats, and level-ups are all present.
Though, as a person who lived a unfulfilling life as a lowlife and a coward, he begins his journey as the bottom-of-the-barrel start: level one.
Those who reach level twenty within the six month time period will be allowed access into "The Tower"--however, what awaits in the mysterious, heavenly tower is unknown.
Not intending to die after living a failed life, Jeong-Hui strives to reach the Tower, using his knowledge as a MMORPG player to ascend.
As an assassin-class and a martial artist class, he utilizes both the "Angel System", widely available to humanity, and another, unique system available only to himself to combat the trials in the way of his journey.
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--WARNING--
This story shows depictions of extremely graphic events. If you're adverse to traumatizing events, gore, death, and such things, this might not be the novel for you.
Otherwise, please enjoy!
When I saw Delz released a new novel, I already knew what to expect. Starting off, the pacing is perfect(not to slow or not to fast, it is right in the middle), and the grammar is A1. Reading novels with choppy grammar is horrible, and really ruins the reading process( for me at least), so reading a novel with great grammar is super refreshing. The characters, systems/powers, and enemies are very engaging early on. When you finish reading this, I recom mend you readers to check out Garden of the Abyss, another one of Delz’s novels. Be warned readers, only read Gareden of the Abyss if you enjoy peak fiction;). All in all I’m ready to see the the future of AOANN!
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Ukraine : "Vladimir- Kun please be gentle ". Vladimir-kun : "sorry Ukraine-chan ,I can't hold back anymore" . *squirts the entire 2nd Guards Motor Rifle Division into Kyev *
mc is pretty relatable so far, though this review is made when there are around 3-4 chapters so keep that in mind. There is some pretty heavy gore at the start, so if that's not your thing then yeah. If it is, have fun lol. I like that everybody is included in the system, it kind of gives me sao vibes.
Time of writting review: 130 chapters in. 1. Writing quality: Thus far, I havnt noticed any jarring errors. Author has a good sense of grammer, and the way he writes is very descriptive. I can truely picture whats happening in the moment when I read. 2. Story development: I feel like the story isn't moving too fast or too slow. We have time to grow attached to characters, and the state of the world. Yet the story continues forward bringing change, not growing stale. 3. Character design: Alot of the characters feel unique in their own way, whether its personality or powers. The MC is not static, he develops his personality at a good pace and grows. (unlike a certain novel I dropped where the Mc is still hyper innocent and niave 700 chapters in... yeah that got old lol). 4. Updating stability: No complaints here, so far author releases a good 1-2 chapters a day which is pretty impressive. 5: World background: I just wanna say, wow! I have read alot of novels, and can't quite recall a premise like this. I am very fond of the lore/background that has been built up, and can't wait to see the secrets that the mc unveils late in the story. (Sure there are *some* elements in the story that have been introduced in other novels, but this is a refreshing blend) Definitely a very unique system novel. I would recommend you read this, as it is criminally under rated.
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Everything about this novel is pretty great. I’d have to say it’ s a top tier novel including great grammer and everything else you could want. If this does not win 1st place, something is rigged
Everything is great so far . Plus it’s a harem, what more do I have to say. Even more the girls actually have a personality which is rare among this genre
Another masterpiece by Delz, exquisitely crafted with clear mastery of writing. The world is built with expertise and the characters are very charming.
Good story very cool I like that the story is based in an MMORPG type setting, just like the critically acclaimed MMORPG Final Fantasy XIV! With an expanded free trial which you can play through the entirety of A Realm Reborn and the award winning Heavensward expansion up to level 60 for free with no restrictions on playtime!!! I also like that the MC is a "kissless virgin", an obvious self insert of the author.
I am very very new to system stories, but if you like RPG's and world ending scenarios entangled in amazing fights and cool skills. I would certainly suggest this to those who are fond of system stories and need something new, Jeong-Hui struggles to live and thrive in his new environment and leveling his skills while working with others in the newfound devastation.
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Good read, the pacing is concise, the action is easy to follow, and the MC is an engaging character you want to follow. If you like systems and MMORPG stories, I'm sure you'll like this one. Keep up with the chapters, author!
not many chapters out yet but it's a nice change of pace from other system stories. it also gets into the action parts really past which I like