Moonlight Sword Sect
One of the three great sects, the Moonlight Sword Sect is a powerful sect that rules over a overwhelming amount of deity-like cultivators, like a dragon that rules over powerful treasures.
The Moonlight Sword Sect, also called as the 「Moonlight Illusions Sect,」is the most feared sect among the three great sects for its profound and mysterious technique that can destroy realities and even the time itself.
Indeed. This is the sect that no one must or even most, "can" fight as this sect is strong by any means, be it offensive or defensive as they can bend the reality to illusions, giving the attacker or defensive side a dim light of hope of surviving from the wrath of the Moonlight Sword Sect.
However...
"Are you really that serious, sect master?"
"Yes, I am indeed serious."
"You're giving away the sect master role to someone so that you can go away from your sect-master duties and court that female cultivator from other sect?! Are you serious sect master?!"
"Yes."
"Sigh... I can't believe this is happening..."
・・・
"Xiare! I challenge you!"
"Hehehe.... Even though you're an OP character, you're still a weakling, my little Eumi. Fine then. I'll accept your challenge. Let's duel! Show me your best cards!"
Indeed. Instead of a more serious tone of what the Moonlight Sword Sect cultivators imagined and portrayed by the other cultivators to be, they were instead opposite of that.
Instead, they were casual, free from worries and most importanty— carefree with no sign of ending. It was as if they were like a joke, despite being one of the most feared sect across the cultivation and mortal world.
Follow the cultivators of the Moonlight Sword Sect as they experience the changing world with their carefree lifestyle.
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About the hiatus,
I really am sorry for that. I will be continuing the series after I'm done with these problems I'm getting. I'm really sorry for that.
Also,
I will be revising and will be fixing the past chapters that I have uploaded so that the others can read the novel without snapping their brains in anger as they look at the grammatical mistakes I casually left out.
I'm sorry for that.
Originality - 4/5 It's a cultivation novel, however, I found an original story within. The sect dynamics, their goals, trials and tribulations. . Story - 5/5 There is a very interesting story here dying to get out. It is hampered by other factors (flow and descriptors). The author's imagination and creativity are obvious to see, but I am having trouble receiving their vision. . Characters - The characters need work. They are likeable, this is not the issue. I like Xiare, Eumi and even Mr Knight. The problem is I do not know what any of them look like. When Mr Knight is introduced Xiare should look at him and describe him in her own words. I find it hard to distinguish any characters beyond the three groups. Women, Men and old people. By their words, thoughts and personality. This improves as the story progresses which indicates the Author works out who they are as she writes. Characters are the main aspect of a story that readers fall in love with. It is extremely important to show; what they look like, their goals or motivations, their personality and quirks, and most importantly their **distinct voice**. . Flow - The flow starts out terrible, but improves chapter by chapter. By chapter 30 its excellent. When someone talks we know who is talking. There is more description in between thoughts and conversation. Suggestion: Take a break from publishing daily, read your entire story. Go back and rewrite chapter 1 to 7. Especially 1 to 3. In these first few chapters describe what the characters look like and put in their personality from the later chapters. Also ensure the reader always knows who is talking or thinking. . Suggestion 2): I think your writing is improving with practice. Just as my first 200,000 words were not as good as my second 200,000 or 3rd, or 4th. etc. So I suggest you keep writing as you will continue to improve at a rapid rate which is already evident. It's my opinion that when you want multiple POVs that you shouldn't have them as first person. You should use third person. This way you can show what characters are thinking without confusion.e.g. Xiare wondered ......, or Eumi was fascinated/frustrated etc etc.
I like how he/she description the story POV and every character have their respective roles without being lake a doll that is only created to help or fight the MC to be strong. The backgroun story not much to talk about because slow tempo the story (BTW i like the tempo to). Read yourself if you want to know easy going story i think because so littel blood bath and much. Anyway is just what i see in the story if you want to know more read yourself 😋😋😋😋
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good story, i had trouble understanding how the novel goes on the first chapters, was very confused, but the rest is good if you have the mind to put the pieces together.