Reincarnated with an Analysis system.

Yo, Author here, Kirito_K5, rewriting this review for new readers. The beginning chapter for about 30 chaps in, are not exactly impressive, but you have to understand, it was learning to write well at that point. I noticed my improvment from around the second arc, the vampire raid, and my story writing took a good turn during the war arc. I ask that you be patient enough and get to the 2nd arc before deciding if you want to drop or not. All love added.❤️

Well... its not bad... but its filled wirh plotholes, inconsistencies and mistskes. He allows mc to do actions that should be impossible for him to acomplish... he was a regular highschool boy and he can dodge a veteran sword strike, catch arrows midflight from elves with his hands. Wield a sycth so well. He can block a rain of arrows from dozen epves with ease???? He did not had any combat skill at all... and mc is so confident lol... not even 1 day and he orders elves to bring him to a F phoenix to desl with thst has been terrorizing elves for hundreds of years?.... you must smoke a lot of wêęđ lol.

Typical story line where MC dies and is reincarnated with a system. Low EQ male with a number of love interests and no clue on how to deal with them. Elements of kingdom building, though it is not to advanced at the moment. Overall it is an interesting novel, though the only negative drawback is that the author hasn’t taken time to proofread his novel. The number of grammar and spelling mistakes is not pleasant to the eyes. I recommend the author take some time out and check his writing in advance. Anyways, it isnt to bad of a read. 👍

fabulous story.... great book..... well done

Slime but wo everything that makes it great. The plot is rushed and convenient. I love harem, but the sequence of events are ridiculous and mc actions are nonsensical. I know that there is some profound plot behind his actions, but there is no build up to that plot. The reader is throw out of the loop far to many times and a "notes" chapter shouldn't be necessary to fill plotholes.

A well done story .

while reading the synopsis should I read this or not, hmm saw "fan of rimiru tempest" yep def reading this

There are so many grammar mistakes, or just mistaking a word for another. The story leaves a lot of essential things out. Hope the author will make a few edits on the first few chapters so at least the new readers could get invested in the novel.

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thought it was reincarnated with anal'¡tic' and clicked on this

fine if you don't mind another idiot MC.

I can't get over the extremely bad grammar. Normally I can over look it, but not when one line is "I need do take closer hearing." not only that but just because you're a fan of an anime, didn't mean you should directly rip off parts of the system. And the random one word Japanese exclamations is just garbage considering the people of the land don't apparently know what Japanese is, yet still use it. hope it got better but I don't pay for something I can find in the free bin.

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Overall a rather entertaining read, and I do recommend at least giving it a go. The premise is obviously heavily inspired from a few other novels, most notably Reincarnated Slime, but still retains a little uniqueness. The author has done a fairly good job, but obvious unfamiliarity with the English language has resulted in plentiful grammatical quality issues. A proofreader would significantly improve the quality, but till then be prepared for a plethora of...interesting word choices.