A nice story with good execution of the plot. There has to be edited to be made as I have seen sentences that were not capitalized and periods or commas were absent when needed. This got potential by the way and I know the author will still grow in his path. Five stars for the effort and story proper! Haha, 🙈 Have a nice day! Glad I pointed it out.
4 years ago
1
BlindBandit
I like how the story portrays, the story and plot is excellent, this novel is a rare find to see in novels, overall its a good read, Keep up the great work author! Kudos to you!
4 years ago
1
Bunny_Junnie
Nice thought! I find it interesting so I am gonna add this book in my library. Also, I like fantasy magic world as I am a big fan of Doctor Strange. So if anyone like this kind of story please give it a try!/I am sure it will not disappoint you
4 years ago
1
CosmicPrime
It was intriguing to read a different type of story with a darker protagonist. I was especially in the power system of the novel and the several engaging fights presented throughout the novel. A good start so far.
4 years ago
1
E_Stunner_Official
The book, the characters! I mean, I never even thought of this concept. How do brains even make up a being who is a sword chaser?! That's amazing. I loved this concept. Besides little mistakes or somethings, this was a fun ride cause the rider, aka me, is a manaic for action and adventure.
4 years ago
1
vava6378
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4 years ago
1
Mill_01
Hey!
Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *)We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
3 years ago
0
Cloki
Great start! Kinda like an "antihero" sort of protag, with a darker aura around him. I like where it's going! Some of the grammar could be improved, but other than that, gj
4 years ago
0
Obito_Uchiha1
I had so much fun reading this story. It is complex, and well written, with lots of depth which gives so much room for a good plot. Beware, if you start reading this ,you won't want to stop !
4 years ago
0
Maryixxx
Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author.
I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers.
Keep writing, Author.
4 years ago
0
miu_hozuki
The book, the characters! I mean, I never even thought of this concept. How do brains even make up a being who is a sword chaser?!
That's amazing.
I loved this concept. Besides little mistakes or somethings, this was a fun ride cause the rider, aka me, is a maniac for action and adventure
A nice story with good execution of the plot. There has to be edited to be made as I have seen sentences that were not capitalized and periods or commas were absent when needed. This got potential by the way and I know the author will still grow in his path. Five stars for the effort and story proper! Haha, 🙈 Have a nice day! Glad I pointed it out.
I like how the story portrays, the story and plot is excellent, this novel is a rare find to see in novels, overall its a good read, Keep up the great work author! Kudos to you!
Nice thought! I find it interesting so I am gonna add this book in my library. Also, I like fantasy magic world as I am a big fan of Doctor Strange. So if anyone like this kind of story please give it a try!/I am sure it will not disappoint you
It was intriguing to read a different type of story with a darker protagonist. I was especially in the power system of the novel and the several engaging fights presented throughout the novel. A good start so far.
The book, the characters! I mean, I never even thought of this concept. How do brains even make up a being who is a sword chaser?! That's amazing. I loved this concept. Besides little mistakes or somethings, this was a fun ride cause the rider, aka me, is a manaic for action and adventure.
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels! + Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing contest! This contest is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi, but if you haven’t worked on these genres, that’s TOTALLY FINE! You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. As all new stories can get cash rewards, this might be your chance to begin your writing career and start to make a living by writing! Not to mention that you can take your chance to win the big cash and get your books published in hardcover! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact vava6378@protonmail.com
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *)We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
Great start! Kinda like an "antihero" sort of protag, with a darker aura around him. I like where it's going! Some of the grammar could be improved, but other than that, gj
I had so much fun reading this story. It is complex, and well written, with lots of depth which gives so much room for a good plot. Beware, if you start reading this ,you won't want to stop !
Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Keep writing, Author.
The book, the characters! I mean, I never even thought of this concept. How do brains even make up a being who is a sword chaser?! That's amazing. I loved this concept. Besides little mistakes or somethings, this was a fun ride cause the rider, aka me, is a maniac for action and adventure