Fate “The Drifter Magus “
Author: Luixto_Miroku
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Darkness, blood, fear and hatred ... crawling from the bottom, our MC rises from the rubble of the war for the holy grail....By the way, English is not my main language ... be patient.
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Sure the grammar being bad and all that is understandable since english is not your maiden language but im only into chapter 2 and the way he openly reveales himself to shirou hella dumb.
So while I like the story the grammar is terrible. I've read 16 chapters and I can't read anymore because of it. This is an easy fix of course a grammar correction program would make this have near perfect grammar. I recommend the author look into these programs and edit the chapters, if you use grammarly you should be able to edit a chapter in just a few minutes.
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Amazing story!! I love how it is written and apart from some small errors with the English it is a wonderful and exciting story!! 5⭐ ..................................................................
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(Google translator) It's a good fic, after reading a few chapters. Although at first the protagonist's stubbornness of not wanting a relationship with the girls he considers to be part of "Shirou's harem" bothered me. Since they hadn't even had any interaction with Shirou and the protagonist already considered them as "Shirou's harem". I hope you continue to include more characters from the nasuverse, author.