The Fate Of The Female Alpha
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An Alpha-mage, one whose soul held nothing but darkness, but was known as the incapable Alpha, because that's how he appears to his pack.
Every Alpha is known to be an arrogant, possessive, egotistical, and controlling person but not this Alpha he was known to be a womanizer, inconsiderate, and undisturbed by the affairs of the pack. he's the most accurate definition of I don't give a sh#t kinda person...
His mate was bound to make him stronger, but when he found her he knew he had to reject her unless he was willing to let the darkness takeover...
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Okay, so do you think the Alpha would reject his mate? would he succeed in holding back the darkness within him?
What if he rejects his mate, but she doesn't take it lightly...
Breelia, Alpha Black's mate, is the daughter of the Alpha of the strongest pack to have ever existed, she hadn't been expecting to fall in love with her mate but when he rejected her, she vowed to make him pay.
How would she make him pay? would they become immortal enemies or would she forgive him?
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#Warnings this book is a slow burn, and you'd have to be patient with the characters as they develop with time.
Things aren't always going to be like sleeping in beds of roses well except they include thorns... haha just kidding... or not. Anyways
please support this book as I actually started it for the WSA contest which I have little confidence about but with your help, we might make it...
And if you still find this interesting after the warnings then thank you for your support...
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PS. Book art doesn't belong to me and would be removed upon request by the true owner.
The beginning is entirely eye catching and enjoyable [img=recommend] it's does involve a little bit of many characters for a first chapter though but it's all good I'm looking forward to seeing this book grow [img=update][img=update] I'll surely recommend this for every werewolf lovers out there
Writing Quality 4/5 - The writing is decent but could edit it a bit more for a more smooth reading time. Also, Author should try to use the rule "Show and not tell" as there is more info dump that's just telling us what's going on which kind of ruins the mood. Stability of Updates 3/5 -I don't think this need much explanation. Author need to update at least 5/week and I'm already being generous giving it a 3 star. Story Development 4/5 - So far the story is looking pretty interesting and intriguing at the same time though some story might be a bit confusing due to the wording choices of the author. Character Design 4/5 - I can tell the author put a lot of thoughts and efforts into making the character based on the chapters I 've read so a solid 4 star in my opinion. World Background 3/5 - Let's just say it was a bit disappointing as I have no idea what it is or maybe it's just my personal opinion. Given how the author is still working their best to produce some chapters, I hope the writing and storyline improves more as we get more chapters.
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This is quite a refreshing book out there and for a new writer does exceptionally well. There a few grammatical and enough plot to hook your interest. I'll suggest this book 24/7. keep up the good work author
A few grammatical errors here and there, and a shaky update schedule, but still a good read for werewolf romance story lovers and the like.