Naruto stat leveling system

U should use quotation marks more and space out ur paragraphs because this is all a mess to read. U should also use a symbol of sorts to show who's talking and who's not.

some grammar mistakes and space between worlds need to be fixed . And a little bit of an annoying concept and dissention make me leave. overall 3.8

I really like this book hope you keep it up mu only problem is the chapters are to short but I understand you are busy with other things keep it up

please comment I would like to hear your suggestion on things I should add or change in this fanfic

Really bad writing quality. Story is rushed over all nothing is explained in a coherent manner. Character development is 0 we do not even know the MC parents. It is just one of the worse overall I have read unfortunately . System in which mission failure will kill the MC but somehow he is still arrogant what a joke

Рассказ слишком не интересный и шаблоный, Было бы интересно смотреть, как он в одиночку всех побеждает, а не как у всех. Типо Гг набирает силы, качает союзников. И в итоге разделяет и тратит свое время впустую. Да, я понимаю, что союзники тоже важны, но тут дело в том, что Гг мог улучшить себя до такой степени, что не один враг не смог бы его победить. Но мы получаем, что Гг качает союзников и тратит время. Отсюда и вылазит эта шаблонка и пустой сюжет. Дальше 10 главы читать уже нет смысла, ведь ты уже понимаешь, что будет дальше и теряешь интрес.

I don't recommend it because, the newbie package was to much , and he start the story to when the Uzumaki clan still exist, not even the anime have much information about Uzumaki clan I already dropp it at chapter 1

Seems like a translation without credit to the original author or a re-upload of a faloo novel. Anyways, this book is just the authors fantasy of powers he thinks are op and does not create any original techniques or powers.

Two chapters was enough to decide that without a team of betas going over this story, it is unreadable, the ideas might be good, but the flow is as broken as the paragraphs are.

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