I Accidentally Found an Overpowered System
Thomas is a loyal commander belonging to a kingdom that was once called the weakest.
With the ‘Rise’ of Thomas, who was declared as the ‘strongest Human of his era' made the kingdom the Greatest.
However…
Everything has to come to an end.
Thomas at an old age decided to retire and live with his family of Four.
The son of the previous king was now the king of that kingdom, he was nothing but a greedy crow that was desperate for Thomas's strength even when his kingdom now had greater goods and soldiers trained by ‘The Strongest Human'.
King tried to persuade Thomas with Kingdom's Wealth, but he only faced endless rejection from Thomas due to now wanting the treasure of the citizens of the kingdom.
The tired and Frustrated king did what a foolish king would do on the advice “To never let the precious treasure fall into the hands of Enemy “
“Destroy it, if you can't have it no one can”
King poison Thomas the strongest human…
In the end the so-called Died this easily, the truth that he had in the new king, he thought the new king was like his former king but no…
Thomas died but that wasn't the end for him, the moment his life ended a new one started…
A blessing or curse that is what you have to find…
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Honest reviews are here.. [Spoiler Alert] This novel is different from the most.. Instead of MC dying on Earth and reincarnated in the magical world, this novel does the opposite.. MC is born in a magical world as strongest Mage and reincarnated on earth without any mana, just pure normal earth.. In previous life, MC is betrayed by the young king because MC, who has become old and just wants a retirement life with his family.. Plus, he and the old king are close, and MC also has done so much for the kingdom.. But as the young king inherited the Throne, the king himself quite corrupted unlike his father (previous king).. After the young king offered many gifts, one after another, to avoid MC retired, MC is firm with his decision, causing the king poisoning MC.. As MC reincarnated as a normal human on normal Earth, MC lived a life of normal people for 17 years UNTIL one day, the gate appeared, and the monster poured out from the gate.. As a result, MC and his family got attacked by the monster and got an offered by Evil System.. MC rejected the offered by Evil System, causing him to become an unawakened person.. Of course, some people in the world are awakened, and some are not.. But after two years, MC became the strongest swordsman among unawakened people.. Not sure how a person "use-to-be strongest mage" becomes the strongest swordsman (excluded awakened person).. Due to that, his guildmate feels more burdened as MC, who unawakened person, can get many achievements while they who awakened barely achieve anything.. This has caused MC to be betrayed by his own captain.. MC held tightly at the end of the cliff after being pushed by his own captain, and can see his end.. Then, after he fell from the cliff, he survived and awakened a new system, which I thought it going to be an overpowered system, but it was not.. MC got betrayed and died on previous life, and he almost died by betrayal AGAIN on this life? Will he ever learn from this? Then, when he finally awakened, MC got nerf right away with "crack soul"? And he can only get information about his crippleness after he becomes SSS-ranker?? Not only that, after he survived the fell, he went back to the guild and didn't kill or cripple the person who tried to kill him? Yup.. this novel is not for me.. I was expecting an OP MC, but this novel doesn't have one.. No wonder this novel going into Hiatus.. I wish the author good luck..
It has a cool premise, but the writing is not very good. The story also struggles to make the characters feel alive instead it feels like a story idea written by an AI.
Tried for 10 chapters and couldn't go any further.