Young Miss Strike Back!

If you’re looking for a fast moving story, this is it. The usual storyline is here, reincarnation, beautiful FL,handsome ML,evil family, etc... This is a great put your feet up and relax kinda story. 👍👍👍

ainda não mais mal posso espera para ler essa história pelo resumo vi que tem um bom enredo espero que me surpreenda e que o curso da história seja interessante

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It is a nice story but it is developing too fast for the story line, I think. It should be some years before she met him again or her family. The relationship started way too fast.

Ok, the story was good at first. Seemed funny with the whole reincarnarion parts, but all of a audden everything got so fast paced. Like author, slow down tf. It made the story less enjoyable. And so many random sexual scenes?? Like the way it builded up doesn’t even make sense. I felt zero romance, cause the writing was so fast and there was barely any room for development in the characters. Fl was likeable at first but later on became sorta dumb? This was after meeting ml too🤦🏻‍♀️ And the ml, don’t even get me started, typical ass self entitled guy who knows he’s the **** and hot, and lowkey forces himself onto her. Just was not a fan of either leads. And the “sister” too? Author I don’t know why you made her dialogue sound like a 13 year old talking when fl and her are the same age. Did you try to make her sound “cute” and innocent or something? I’m not sure but it made the writing less interesting and professional. Overall, I dont recommend, seems enjoyable at first but wasted my time reading. Way too fast paced and poorly developed characters. Author take this review as constructive criticism, cause this story could be way better if heavy editing is done.

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It's not a bad story. Good for someone who just wants a lite read. Everything in this book moves too fast to be realistic. Everything is mostly handed to the MC without struggle. And the comedy parts are often over the top and ridiculous.

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While I did somewhat enjoy reading this story, I felt I was reading a sexually charged story written by a young teenager. The character development was poor and the story developed so fast, it caused wiplash. While it was humurous at times, it was beyond unrealistic. It has a lot of potential for improvement though. I don’t know. I am left wondering what I just read and wondering why I bothered finishing this.

Thanking you for this wonderful book and a good rebirt plot The family relationship with so much love makes the story a good one No major misunderstanding between the main characters Congratulations for finishing this up A good short story indeed 👏👏👏

Best story so far that I have read,my first novel to give review on,qudos to you author, more of it the story line is so perfectly arranged,

overall story is good its about sweet male lead badass female lead and cute story with full revenge and its beautiful too. so its wroth to reading it

This has got to be one of the best book I've ever read and I've read a lot i find my self trying to unlock all because of how good it is .I hope you continue with such a awesome book will try all of your books.

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