Worth Fighting For
She looked at the man dressed in his guard’s uniform and whispered, “The truth is, I’m—I’m the Crown Princess.”
He looked at her in disbelief. His gaze lingered on her maidservant’s outfit before he let out a chuckle. “Well then, let me tell you a secret. I’m actually a prince from the Western Continent,” he whispered.
Under that wisteria tree, both of them were telling the truth, but both thought that those words were nothing but a joke.
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"Your Highness," the Commander stepped forward and bowed to greet the Princess. "We've been looking for you all over the palace," he paused to give her a look over. "Are you alright? Did this man do anything to hurt you?"
His face turned ghastly at what was happening before him. "Your Highness?" he repeated the words in a whisper. He looked at the girl in front of him in disbelief. "You're... a royalty?"
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Amelia Reed, a young princess of Noa Kingdom has lived her life carefree under her brother, the king’s protection. When the king went missing, Amelia was forced to ascend the throne as his substitute. But, as someone who knows nothing about politics or wielded any power, Amelia soon found that the people around her wanted to harm her.
By coincidence, Amelia ran into Laif, who saved her when she was in trouble.
Laif Draven/Hue, a prince of a kingdom called Hase, gave up his position to escape the palace life. When he was sent over to Noa Kingdom to look for a lost magic artifact, Laif then found himself back in the palace life. Hiding his identity, Laif then entered Princess Amelia’s palace as her guard, defending her from her enemy and guiding her to get through the palace life.
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Cover illustration: kirinlukis
Overall, I would say this story is a strong success! My one recommendation would be to try and reread your work before publishing to avoid overuse of some words/phrases. For example, using the term 'snow-white' twice in the same paragraph seems a tad excessive. Consider swapping one to 'glistening white' or something similar. Other than that, a very wonderful piece, Author!
It's a great story, Author with nothing too complications. I like it, honestly and believe this novel would bloom into a beautiful flower if you just follow your path. There's nothing to nitpick about and to be honest, any who does nitpick is simply picking a fight with you. Punch 'em in the face!!! I just hope you don't drop the novel.
Good story author... I love your writing style.. After reading 70 chapters I came here to give a review... Thank you author for sharing a good story with us.. Love u... ❤️❤️
Great story dont need fancy word to desccribe it, what it need is peoplE to read it, feel it, explore it. And i have a pleasure in reading your story. Thank you
The plot is amazing. The way Amelia is fighting to find out the truth as well as trying her best to rule the kingdom is well planned and put forth before the audience. The characters are well portrayed. The writing style is flawless and clear, as well as easy to understand. The story is very intriguing with the author using the right scenes to uphold the mystery. This keeps the readers hooked to the book. Overall, this book is great. Well done author.
You have a good starting point. The story development is beautiful. Your characters are strong especially Amelia. She is one powerful character, I love her and I hope the king returns safely. Good job author.
A nice beginning, the synopsis was well written and piqued my interest. The pace felt just perfect. Now I just want to know the whole story. I would definitely recommend it to others..
Read up to Chapter 11. Story is still at the earlier side of development but even with a small amount of chapters, the Author has managed to weave together an interesting story. Stringing together character interaction and world building in one fell swoop making it a joy to read. Really interested to see how the Story progresses, keep up the good work.
Honest review here. Writing Quality, the word of choice is easy to read, blending nicely to the paragraph, every word vocabulary was chosen to because to make it more sounds cooler but to make it easier for the readers to understand the story flow. (Seriously as a newbie author I am learning here.) Story Development, I like reading a book about royalty so I might be biased from it, so I have no qualm for giving it five stars. Character Design, I like Amelia's characterization, maybe because of a writer's point of view. I could see a lot of materials that can be used in her characteristic. Overall It is a good read, the only downside is, we writers of a slice of life, tend to make things much longer. I guess we need to be flexible so that our readers won't get bored. Nice story author. :)
Wow!! I'm glad I'm the first person to review this novel. The synopsis felt very good. One losing freedom for kingdom and the other losing kingdom for freedom. I felt bad for Asher. Ofc, I understood something bad must have happened to him while reading. But I didn't want my expectations to become true .However,somethings are inevitable. Character design and world background creation is good. The writing style is unique and good. Overall I liked this book. Story development is also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. Keep up the good job author. Curious to know what happens later.
Interesting plot which ended with a cliffhanger. Unfortunately there’s been no update since 2 years ago 😢 Hope the author will continue updating this novel 🙏🏻