I Am the Mentor of Spider-Man

The system is clearly unnecessary in this story, the idea is incredible, but adding a system to this story spoils all the intensity and interest in the work

I support you my friend I am your number 1 fan,please guys support my friend

I love the story and it is a great idea and I hope you continue on with your story but it's not for me it's to fast paced were he doesn't really work hard for his powers. For me it takes away a massive chunk of who spider man is the hardwork and determination he has. Most people don't realize but spiderman while stronger then almost every single villain is usually shown to be weaker cause he doesn't kill or try to hurt his villains he always looks for a different option. While he is strong he constantly looks for ways to improve himself and his abilities. So each spider man is unique in their own way and with how this is going I don't see him becoming his own version of spiderman just mimicking the hero he looked up to. Also making it where there is template's he can aquire were he can get a person's skills and hardwork that they poured their entire life into doesn't sit right with me. To get that without any of the hardships or Training it's like giving a person Ironmans suit so now he is iron man when it's the person who makes the hero and the hero they become inspire others to be better versions of themselves.

THE_V1S1ON Excellent Fanfic Keep up the great work. You can do this Spiderman fanfic idea directly after I Am the Mentor of Spider-Man I'm Miles Morales, so what? This story will be completely different; our hero is not the altruist we are used to seeing him. He is a person who acts only for his and his women's well-being. Trent was a gamer and loved to play the Marvel's Spider-Man series by Insomniac Games until he woke up in the body of Miles Morales at the start of Marvel’s Spider-Man: Miles Morales. Harem Ebony Brown Cristal (Boondocks) Luna (Boondocks) Lakeisha Grant Monet Stewart Tejada Diana Tejada Jessica Figueroa Raquel Thomas Dee Dee Tubbs Roberta Tubbs Donna Tubbs

It's a really cool story. Got pretty into it at the beginning, but dropped off due to all the different POVs. That and it seems like you're constantly being whiplashed back 10 minutes before to see what 6 or 7 other characters were doing while the mc was busy.

Well, it was weird at the beginning, but then it became more interesting as was explored more of the character's backstory. I would completely change the beginning, adding more surprise from the transfer to other universe, misunderstanding of what is happening before the system appears, and again before its appearance (where information about the universe is revealed and info about when the original Spider-Man appears) not to show the protagonist’s obsession with mentoring

TRAGEDY? .

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Will they be 'Inheritors' and Morlun in the story?

great story with good character design .keep going author 👏

wonderful novel, great ideas keep it going

When is this story gonna be done it so good am lowkey who the love interest

I support your novels author 💕 keep it Up

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