Operation: Make Him Fall For Me!
Excerpt:
"Chance, let my wrist go, or else, I will kick you right into your balls!" She threatened but he didn't listen.
Rather, he pulled her closer to his touch and ambled out of the building. She kept shoving his grip around her wrist apparently, he didn't have a plan to let it go.
"Let me go Chance!" She protested.
He loosened the grip, stopping their track. He started right to her fiery, glared eyes before he implores seriously, "why are you averting me? Why did you accept my mother's offer?!"
"Why do you care? I can date whatever I want!"
"Christian doesn't like you! He likes Mia so don't be so desperate for his attention! He will never like you!"
Her eyes widened while stroking her wrist and to eased the pain.
He bites his lips, realizing his statement. He strolled closer to her, feel the pang of guilt inside his chest when her tears rushed through her cheeks.
However, she was taken aback, and hastily, she wiped all her tears...
"You don't need to rub the reality onto my face, Chance… In the first place, I know Christian didn't like me and will never be. Yet, you rejected your mother's offer." She uttered softly but her eyes kept telling her despair and anger.
"Aly… I—"
"Yes, I liked Christian but… It's in the past. You have your chance to win my heart but you lose it. Now deal with it." She sternly said and left him behind...
Melancholy.
She fell in love with a guy who protected her from the bad guys when they were little and she made a promise to herself that she would follow him wherever he went. She was very happy when seeing him and they became friends in school.
However, the guy didn't even notice her feelings for him and instead, he loved someone else before he left without any track. She tried to ask his two older brothers but he can't say it since it became covert and even his friends didn't know where he went. He left her with her heart broken and lived in despair. She just wanted him to love her.
Her name was Alyssum Bryne and she fell in love with her best friend, Chance Bailey.
Will they have a happy ending?
Or…
Will their path cross when fate gives them a chance to meet?
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It's not for me to review my own novel but I just want to give some points about this novel. This is the first time I made novel in 3rd POV so please bear with me. If there's some mistakes, don't hesitate to leave a comment and tell me so I could edit it right away. Also, it's not the continuation of my other novel, 'The Guy in a Coffee Shop' but there some scenes that will mentioned that related to my MC in 'The Guy in a Coffee Shop' Thank you for passing by and add my novel to your library! Giving powerstone might support me! I love you all!
A novel that tackles a love chance between best friends! The what-ifs between the types of existing love- Looking forward to this book! Love is a beautiful fear that exists between many relationships, I wonder how the characters' love persists in the midst of the pain and melancholy, the struggles and situations in the future- VERY EXCITED!!! ლ(╹◡╹ლ)
I think u should update the story in time because u are such good author.u r making us curious about the story .please update the story as soon as possible.. [img=update][img=recommend]
First, I wanted to applaud the author for a job well done. The plot is great, * chef's kiss, just felt like it would be so much angst. I have yet to read a chapter that isn't interesting. The plot is great, the synopsis is great the characters are great but there's one thing that is bothering me, the time where the narrator's thoughts transitioned to something else confuses me. I couldn't follow up at times, and there are words that doesn't suit the phrase (I had forgotten already but there are) it's like there is a better word suitable for that but is not used. If this issue is fixed, then it will be great for the readers. Keep up the good worrrkkk a recommended story for y'all.
Oh! Young love~ what an interesting start! The plot is catchy enough. Although there may be a few grammatical errors here and there, it's editable. As for now, the errors doesn't hinder one in reading the story. Hope you can update more~ 🥰💖🥰💖
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I remembered my childhood huhuhu I really can't stop smiling when I read the first chapter I can relate to the kid when I was a child😂 after all this story was nice and well written. Keep it up the good work!
Chance! Held my wrist too! 😭😭😭 Imma have you in my lifeee.. The story is indeed nice and i wanna read more of this!! Author I'll be waiting for the nxt update of your chapter !! ❤️
Interesting story you got there, author. 🤔🤔🤔 But when will you update your story? It's been one month yet no update... you should make this again.
Another story that I'll love in the long run although it only has few chapters. The grammatical errors are editable but the content is there. So I love this.