Divine Wars
Death. Always the start of great adventures. Difference is Drake doesn't get an adventure he gets a job. Forced into godhood. Literally. All he has to do is create. Easy right?. How hard is it to be a god?
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[DING]
[BODY CREATION MODULE]
[TRUE FORM SELECTED]
[CREATION COMMENCED]
I watched as a whitish gold stream of seemingly liquid stuff flowed out of me. At this point I realized I still couldn't see myself almost like I didn't exist but I still could note my surroundings and this liquid leaving me.
I watched as it flowed into the screen and like a vessel began filling the form I made. Slowly it left the screen and hovered to the side on a podium that I didn't even realize was there all along.
10%...
20%...
30%...
40%...
50%...
60%...
70%...
80%...
90%...
100%.
[DING]
[CREATION COMPLETED]
The form totally came to being looking even grander and bigger than it had on screen. The muscles were more detailed and the body screamed powerful.
If this wasn't my body I would have peed in my pants just at the sight. Luckily it was my body and I didn't have an excretory organ.
Another chime and more words popped in my mind.
[DING]
[BINDING ???? DIVINITY WITH TRUE FORM]
[BINDING COMMENCED]
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New review at 116 chapters of writing. Author here. I'm not really fast or slow by my thoughts .Im makong a whole new multiverse in this book . Avoiding popular myths and concepts to make a brand new one. It may not be as great but it's definitely fresh . My MC isn't going to be experiencing other myths or lores. He'll be creating his very own from the very start to the end. Always wanted to do this .If it bores you or just doesn't interest you then cool. Rhe beginning is not to great. Was a half assed work then .Now though after falling in love with my MC I'm definitely finishing this book. So I'll be slow since im literally putting things that don't exist but will have a bit of familiarity to not make it too strange.
Hey I'm the author. So of course I'm giving myself a shameless review. First thing I did with this book is that I removed the normal generic smart and intelligent MC. We all know what happens when an MC is intelligent. But what if it's a normal kid with no brain power or anything that makes him special. My writing quality I can't say much about that ill just say. I hope it's readable. World background. Well this is the major focus of my book. So yeah. Hope you guys enjoy. And this is my first work. So bear with me please if it's not as good as the other better works. Thank you.
reviewing at 19 chapters Overview: a story about a man who died and became the god of a fledgling multiverse. I think it is quite good. I find the ideas so far to be very good and relatively creative. If the author chooses to continue writing this book and improving I have no doubt this will be a top 15. Pros: A lot of different directions the story could go aka a lot of potential genuinely fun to read especially since the mc has a split personality so even when he is alone it is entertaining to watch the squabbling. (the split personality is a plot device which is a guiding mc in his godhood, not a major plot point otherwise) Con: the writing quality is very inconsistent. at times it is up to par with some top 15s but other times there is major typos/ grammar mistakes which confuse the reader to what is happening. It isn't to the point where it is unreadable but it is irritating and if you can't deal with it I would not blame you. This is something I hope the author will improve upon by double checking his/her work. Otherwise this is a book I would read for a thousand chapters and I would want nothing more than for the author to continue their work since it is a fun read with tons of potential.