Three days. That’s how close I was to marrying Alistair, the man I’d loved for six years, the man whose life I’d literally saved with my own rare blood. I was just admiring the final pearl on my wedding dress, a gown I’d poured my soul into, when he called.
The wedding? Off. He was marrying my stepsister, Ivy. Her dying wish, he said. Six months to live, maybe less.
The kicker? He’d already taken my wedding dress from my studio for her.
Just like that, six years, countless transfusions, our shared dreams – all tossed aside for the girl who’d made my life a living hell since childhood. He even offered me “compensation,” as if my future had a price tag.
But if Alistair and Ivy thought I’d just crumble, they seriously underestimated me. They wanted my fiancé? Fine. But it would cost them. First, our multi-million-dollar fashion company, Evening Gala – built on my designs, my vision. He signed it over. Then, a cool million for the stolen dress. He paid. Another million for the wedding jewelry they dared to ask me to hand over for Ivy. Cha-ching.
You’d think they’d learn. But no. Their next proposal was the most insulting yet: Alistair actually suggested that I should just wait. That after Ivy’s ‘inevitable’ passing in a few months, he and I could just pick up where we left off, have an even better wedding. Seriously?
Enough was enough. If Ivy wanted to play bride with my life, she was going to get a taste of what happens when you push someone too far. Let's just say her hospital room celebration involved a lot more smoke, water, and screaming than she bargained for, all thanks to a little wedding gift from yours truly.
Now they know I’m not the same Hazel they could walk all over. I’ve got my company, a pile of their cash, and a whole lot of scores to settle. They think this is over? This game of revenge is just getting started. And believe me, I play to win.
This story has great potential. someone needs to edit it for consistency. it reads as if AI wrote 3 scenarios for each big scene and no one chose one, just included them all. They also read out of order on many areas, referencing things that didn't happen until late in the book. There is a lot of mismatch throughout. Example- she met Mrs. Sinclair for the first time several times. She met Sebastian several times. Dinner was mentioned early in the book but the actual dinner was many chapters later. I'm paying for chapters that are just covering the same ground. I cannot get into it because it keeps backtracking. I'm all for using AI to help flush out chapters, but someone needs to be editing for flow and accuracy.
Dear writer! Please write the story coherently related to one chapter to another. Thank you.
Pretty sure it is AI written, but not sure even AI would make that many plot mistakes. Would be better if details and scenarios didn’t change every chapter.
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I agree with comments above, great potential but the story line keeps changing. Please edit
The bilionair backs me up? Same names and plot practically… a way of taking your coins?
Such a great storyline. I can’t wait to read what happens next.