The Strongest Beast Tamer

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Obviously, have to be shameless and give my novel 5 stars. This novel is my take on stories such as Monster Pet Evolution, Pokemon and all those types of stories. I believe I have a good idea for the story and have plotted the first arc already (it'll only be 4 - 5 chapters). I'll easily be able to plot out the rest of the arcs, mainly cause I've had this idea for a while and have constantly improved and changed it I do hope you enjoy reading it and aren't to fuss about my English.

A good but unfortunately immature story. I don't mean that in that the themes are childish and there are problems with the world, what I mean is that it is literally undeveloped as a concept. Perhaps if I used to author's power level convention it would be better to describe it as 'adolescent'. The start of the story is honestly relatively good, starting with a prologue which starts out in a fairly unique direction, a system that fails to install. It shows up in the story proper but I found the choice to start the story that way was honestly refreshing. The first two volumes are fairly good, though they still show the problems that the story has with it pacing through out. It's both painfully slow and ridiculously fast. The story is trapped in a span of several days where very little happens and the world function ok, and then globally everything goes to hell. There is no ramp up or foreshadowing so it's pretty jarring. Unfortunately after volume 2 the MC becomes a 10 year old edge lord who solves everything with violence and people let him get away with it. Honestly even if you're the strongest person on the scene when you start running rampant on military bases and smacking soldiers around, they're going to find a way to sort you out. That said I think the writer should keep writing, I think they have some talent that if they work on developing would enable them to express a much more impressive story, there are already shadows of it showing up in this story. The advice I would recommend is counter to what I tell most authors: you need to go back and rewrite your story. This story begins with a solid and interesting concept, but a concept isn't a story. Your concept is 'what happens to make the story'. You refine that into a story premise, 'this is what happens in the story I want to share'. A clearer expression may be that your story concept is a single sentence, your premise includes that concept but expands it to a paragraph. After that work on pacing and world development, try to come up with a power scale that ramps up slowly. From the get go everyone the MC encounters are either high or perfect compatibility unless they have two different compatibles. And the main character is always presented as the strongest by a ridiculous margin. There are lots of things I think could be done better but I don't want to tell the author how to make his story so I'll end with this: The concept you created can become a better story than this, and I honestly believe you can write a better story then this at this point.

Very uninteresting so far.and i personally feel it doesnt even have much potential.so not gonna waste my time on this.too bad.i had high expectations when i read the title in the beginning.

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Nice read, chapters relatively short but most of the time has actual content within it. Writing quality can use an improvement, but aside from the little mistakes here and there, it's quite good. The updates are stable most of the time, with unexpected IRL events that might make you delay a release which is completely understandable. Would love for you to release more, but can't ask for too much. The character designs can improve, possibly give them different personalities and make sure they always follow them. As for the world, it's good, I like the concept of the whole world getting an abrupt evolution. A bit nicer than the whole isekai thing.

This is a very good Beast Tamer LN. I highly suggest reading it. There are multiple different worlds in this LN. This is a nice world-evolution and beast taming novel. First 30 or so chapters are where the MC takes his family and gets them to where their dad is. They tame beasts along the way. After that the MC moves on with the main story plot. They find new land that wasn't there before the world-evolution. They go there to find new plants and food and to see what it is all about. I am trying to keep this vague so I don't spoil it. They find stuff it is quite good. They find and figure out ways to increase their stats without needing to increase the levels of their beasts. This is good because their beasts run into a bottle neck in leveling at level 10. To go beyond level 10 requires the best to evolve and they have to try to figure out how to do that. They do find out info about it and what they will need. This isn't something that takes them for ever to get info on. The beasts won't evolve over night since they have to find things to help them evolve and it is different for every beast/type and even the same type can evolve down different paths and the tamer can pick what evolution paths to have their beast evolve.

Thanks for the update and for the record I have been reading about the novel from the start to the new one and I hope for the best way possible that you could get the story to evolve and get the story to be more specific and excited

Hello All Still in chapter 30 and it has been decent so far, very refreshing concept with Aussie Land and how the Taming works. Would love to see author exploring more details like this in the future. Things a little rushed with less details than what most people would expect. The MC is immature (even though he is 15 with the internet today.....is kind of unusual to see lol) and introverted which does not help some of the development.....I mean so far he learned a lot about the apocalypse rules/ Evolution but only shared the minimal with his family......expect a little more family trust and hope to see this coming up soon as he matures......but is a work in progress and really looking. For the author and MC progress in the future. Lease keep up improving! I love the theme of taming beast without a Pockeball or godly OP skill!

I love how they wrote this story. It is as realistic as it can be and I like it. I also like how there's not too much drama on it. But the story needs improvement still.

This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it soon as you do

This chapter keeps getting better and better I can’t wait tell the next chapters come out so please write it soon so I’ll be able to read it.!.!.!.!.!.

Everyone who rated it below at least 4.5 is all stupid this story is amazing I have a great day and I will be a good time to get the same as the same thing I can do to get a new one and only one of my