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Theodore Black, a normal person in an abnormal world where genetic superiority is everything, and when I say everything I mean everything from the smallest amoeba to the gigantic RI pterodactyl, had a dream.
Being normal is like a blessing but not in this case. The world is so advanced that a normal person is worse than an automated coffee table.
Due to his normality, Theodore has a very not-so-happy life. He doesn't have a job, like who would even hire a normal wannabe like him for any task? His parents and peers thought he was a lost cause, maybe he was.
Until...
One day the deputy head of the international space association came to visit him. He first thought it was a prank or perhaps some sort of mistake but soon reality hit him. He was asked to do his dream job, going to space. But there was a catch.
.... a few weeks later he found himself stranded on an unknown planet with not-so-friendly races.
To take cover he crawled into a cave and got attacked by a woman, not in an aggressive way but a romantic way. She kissed her for what seemed like a thousand years and...
And then...
Romance, Yandere, System are the main tags.
Warning! Mc starts out as a very weak protagonist. But he eventually goes through stuff and then comes character development. I'd appreciate it if I didn't receive comments like, "Why's he so wimpy?" "Why does he just keep on depending on others?" and such. There are reasons and they'll be explained.
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it's good don't drop also I fell like it's obvious but is there romance. I don't know what else to say except yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Write this review around the latest four chapters so far. Review Proper (Might contain spoilers ahead!!!) Writing Quality. Well, I'm still learning a lot about writing grammar myself so other than the basic grammar stuff, I can't say much. However, the author really did well in writing the narratives for this story. The structure of each scene and grammar are on par with the top novels here at WN. Stability of Updates: So far the author has stable updates, and mentioned in the synopsis that it will be around Saturday and Sunday. Good thing, since the readers will not be anxious each day wondering when there will be updates. Story Development. The opening chapter started with a bang! It's very interesting. Then it smoothly transitioned to the protagonist's life. Theodore was vividly described as someone normal and as a normal person as well, I can relate well. I looked forward to the further development of the story. Character Design. Based on how the author describes the characters, they really act that way and speak the way in line with their personalities. Nothing feels forced in the dialogues and such. World Background. I love it. I myself am a fan of system novels. And with a setting that is intergalactic and sci-fi added, truly a chef's kiss. Recommendation: Just read the first chapter, and I know you will definitely like to continue reading it. It's sad that I don't have stones right now, but I will definitely vote for this when I have. Overall, this will definitely stay in my library! I look forward to more chaps! Great work, author!
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gonna be honest, i did think the idea is intresting but after reading till the locked chaps i got bored more and more, still taste differs but sadly its not for my taste. still keep the work going
The author has a good writing skills... the story can easily understand and the discription is very vivid.... the story is very captivating and detailed 😊😊😊
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1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
Legends say that a normal guy died of ligma and received the supreme licking system... ..................................................................
The novel is good if you just want to leisurely spend time. Though you might be bothered by mistakes here and there, but it's good overall. ---
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