Alex Wayne arrives at Marvel

not much to comment here, overall it's good. just probably need some work on the pacing of the story. some arrangements to the events would be great, don't focus on battle

too much forced plot, eg. he defeated kingpin who had help from hydra, hand and Skrull but he did not kill him even knowing how vile Fisk is. and he is continuously fighting where he can kill and finish it all together.

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super short, rushed plot, author is after more chp instead of content. writing is ok. but plot itself is trash. u can try if you have not read many novels in this genre or some good books like, hyperspace transmigration, otherwise this book will just eat your brain cells

I haven't read the fanfiction yet but with the mc being the wielder of imagine breaker the mc should not have any lucky encounters and if anything could go wrong it with because the mc has no luck. imagine breakers ability is to cancel out anything supernatural natural even including luck and maybe plot amor, also the mc wont be able to use magic . so the mc should be the unluckiest person in the whole fanfic. P.S also you cant get rid of imagine breaker it picks it wielder and sticks to then even if you cut off their arm it grows back. Does imagine breaker have the seven dragons sealed with in it?

I have a very serious question, why does MC not try to learn magic. His 1st power is 'imagine breaker', or whatever. it makes sense for him to search Kamar-taj. The most basic thing to do when you land in MCU is to check whether you can learn magic or not and even if not you will learn to tackle it.

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I just want the chapters to be complie because the chapters are too short but overall this is a pretty good read if you can complie the similar chapter then it would be even better.

good story..... nothing bad to say.... gotta really appreciate the update speed and stability.... can't complain when you get to read something new so often

if you are a marvel fan who loves ff's then this is a must read for you. The mc has a good character, a family man of i must say. Even though this is a harem fic it is very well organised. In many harem ff' you forget if the particular girl was in the harem or not, but that is not the case here. personally i enjoyed reading this.

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this fanfict It IS Gold gold gold gold gold gold gold gold gold gold gold gold gold gold gold gold

I've never read any of the marvel comics before, but just from the movies I've watch, i can still follow along pretty easily. love that the author has pictures of just about every single character in the comments where they're first mentioned!

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