*Slow Burn Historical Fantasy Novel*
Elise had about to change into the dress that was lying on the corner of her bed when she heard a knock lightly calling from her door. Curious, she turned the door knob only to have a tall man towering in front of her.
“Master Ian!” She called.
Ian smiled with the usual mischievous smirk that he always used. His crimson eyes trailing a little over her room and spotted the black dress over her bed and shifted his eyes over to the woman in front of him. He stepped forward and spoke. “Where did you acquire that dress?”
“Mr. Harland gave it to me.” Elise replied and strained her neck to see Ian’s brows knitted in its elegance.
“Do you know why a man would love to give a woman a dress?” He gave the riddle that she always had to think twice before replying. But this time, she found no answer and instead shook her head. “I don’t know.”
His grin grew bewitching as though something had stirred deep inside the scarlet eyes that he had. He slowly slid his hand over the collar of her dress, sending a cold shiver that startled her for a moment due to its freezing temperature. After unbuttoning the first two buttons on her collar, he tilted his head down, whispering to her ears. “Because they want to be the one to undress the cloth.”
He paused and kissed her neck, turning the pale skin to red before retracting his move to fix his eyes on her and leisurely replied. “Unfortunately, you can’t wear the dress over there with this.” He chuckled and passed a box over to her hand. “And the fortunate news is I prepared a dress for you.”
Elise was a cursed little girl who could see ghosts. Her family hated her and threw her from one adoptive family to another. However, misfortune didn't act alone. When she was brought up by her aunt, she was sold as a slave. When she had thought she would become nothing but a sacrifice to the sorcerer, she was saved by a man whose identity was far different than a normal mythical being.
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I’m really loving this book. The characters are well written and developed and the story definitly draws you in making you want to unravel the mysteries. There are lots of different plot paths happening aside from the main leads romance and I can see them shaping to be very good. I’m particularly fond of the way the author portrays the female lead, as if she is a blooming rose slowly opening herself up to the world and love.
I love the book . it has a great story line and very sensual slow building romance. The two lead chemistry is🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥and i loved how they come together. i has all the elements sadness, pain, joy, love, desire, lust you name it there which makes a great story line. i can’t wait for the ending chapters. ❤️❤️❤️❤️🔥🔥🔥❤️❤️❤️❤️
The more I read of this story the more I love it. I reviewed this book a while ago raving about how good it was and how I was excited to see the story progression, well I can wholeheartedly say that I completely stand by my previous words and, if it is at all possible, I love the book even more now. The mysteries of this story have deepened even further as the story has progressed which has completely drawn me in further and compelled to keep reading excitedly to find out where this story leads. The relationship between Ian and Elise has developed into something very beautiful and it’s a true display of what unconditional love really is. It is so wonderful to see Elise bloom under Ian’s affection. The whole book is so exceptionally well written and it has quickly become one of my favourite reads of all time. The characters and storyline are developed really well and the scenes are portrayed fantastically, you really get a sense for each characters personalities and their dynamic with those around them. I definitely recommend giving this book a read for yourself, it is well worth it! I will continue reading avidly and hope I continue to see this book doing well and gaining in popularity because it wholly deserves it! Well Done author!
I love the story the mystery on it is good and the male lead is a real gentlemen with a heart even thought he is a demon as for the story it is really interesting and took as a subject a case that the people are suffering from in the past and also the present
A definite must read! The story keeps getting better and better as it progresses. If you like fantasy, magic and mystery then this story is for you. I was intrigued from the very first chapter. I love how the characters bring so much depth to the story with their unique backgrounds. I seriously can’t wait for another update. Love your work author 😘❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Very good first chapter.. nice description, good writing.. amazing author.. I really enjoy this story.. I don’t forget to refresh my library for see if it’s had an update ;) Thank you author ^^ I hope you can update more often ^^
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This is an interesting story full of mixture of everything. From the tags and story upto now, there are different races of beings, history, mysteries and interactions all being connected. The background sceneries, the atmosphere and emotions are described vividly. As said in the author's note, it's a slow burn story, but it helps to build up the story and is enjoyable to imagine along.
The second review, which I might be doing a lot more... ;) Hope you won't be bothered! Your story needs all the reviews on how great it is! Keep up your hard work! :)
The story in this novel is so beautiful. Where they take place and the characters are all so amazing! Continue on with your great work. Please keep on with the updates, with more chapters! Thank you :)
Great story with plenty of drama and some humor. Definitely keeps you coming back for more. My one critique would be to please edit before submitting. The grammar and spelling errors pull you out of the fantasy world.
Great story, great characters. Definitley original and not a repeat of the same old story lines. The biggest issue is the grammar - I’m not sure if this was translated to English or if the author is writing in English but its not her primary language - there are so many verb tense errors and typos that it really detracts from how great the book is.
Over all is amazing the Lord is a mysterious man and there are hints that tell that he is a demon. The world are beautifully express by the author and it surprise me very much with the way the author bring the characters to live, if anyone is trying to read i suggest this book! although it is a slow burn it is good for building up.
I love this story very much thank you author for bringing an amazing story to life. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
This story is absolutely amazing!!! I enjoy every chapter and the characters make the reading experience 100 times better!! The author does an excellent job at executing each chapter, and the story never fails to please me! 10/10 would recommend you to read this story!😁👍