Spirit Orbs : Chronicles of Ra'as

Spirit Orbs : Chronicles of Ra'as

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Author: R_F_T_S
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A twist of fate or more like an unexpected turn of events send four individuals on a journey across the realms of Ra'as, a world of superpowers and extraordinary individuals.



An adventure that will put them against powerful foes and will enable them uncover the secrets behind the real origins of their world is about to begin.



Unknown to our protagonists though is the fact that the threat of war looms over the Planet Ra'as with several factions getting into a struggle for the possession of the omnipotent device known as the Spirit orbs.



An epic tale of love and loss, pain and suffering, despair and revenge awaits all those willing to embark on this adventure with our protagonists.





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Uzochukwu_John
Uzochukwu_John

this book is noice, but there is no major romantic conflict between the three main characters, a love triangle to clarify,[img=update] romantic conflict

5 years ago
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The_Procrastinator
The_Procrastinator

Reveal Spoiler

5 years ago
6
notsosure
notsosure

The character build up is awesome. The characters are very realistic and I like the pace of the book. I'm looking forward to more chapters.👍👍👍👍

5 years ago
4
John_Uzochukwu
John_Uzochukwu

Overall I'll say it's a really good book, top notch characters, uhhhhh, not so shabby character design, and piece of the art world building,dan howbeit quite similar to most protagonist is one of the few main characters that actually seeks vengeance but doesn't let go of basic morality, illara isn't a pushover and actually stands out unlike most female leads, and sai isn't the dumn jock boyfriend, all in all I think it's a great story.👍👍

5 years ago
2
Jimpaly
Jimpaly

First of all, I’m going to point out that this story is around 70% action and 30% mystery. If you’re looking for action-packed scenes and descriptive fights, then this story’s for you. Other than that, I love the world-building you did in the beginning and as the story continues. The plot is eventful and interesting, but it feels like a lot of the mystery is already spoiled since it tells you who the bad guy is (but idk there might be more to the story that hadn’t been revealed yet). The supernatural abilities are placed well in the combat, though it might be nice to see them used outside of fights. The characters have nice interactions and there is a strong female lead, but you could give them clearer and more distinct personalities. The major issue is probably that you should work on your punctuation, sentencing, and paragraphing. Your word choice is great but there’s a lot you can improve. But overall, I love where the story’s going and I can’t wait for more!

5 years ago
2
AimbotNinja
AimbotNinja

4 years ago
1
AJPaturde
AJPaturde

I liked this book, cool setting, and storyline. I have reviewed this book I hope the author comes and does it to mine also, lol kidding.

5 years ago
1
Zanyyy
Zanyyy

I haven't really gotten far in reading this book but from what I've read I can tell that the author put a lot of work on the characters. The action is really too notch and I can't wait to read more!💯

5 years ago
1
GeorgeOfTheCity
GeorgeOfTheCity

Would love to read more. Good work with developing the characters. If you're new here and love books with a lot of action, this is the book for you.

5 years ago
1
readlashes
readlashes

I ****en love the starting line of your book! Nice writing style, Unique story line, Not clichè, What more could I want in a book? This is a recommended read!!!!!!!

5 years ago
1
Alanala
Alanala

The Prologue was a lil' bit of an info dump, but it's alright, probably. Grammar can improve, I already saw the author's comment on it- I won't fault :pensive: Otherwise, the story is so far- heating up, great setting, ez collection

5 years ago
1
MITCHIEWilliams
MITCHIEWilliams

This is a very interesting book. The plot is interesting. The characters are also well developed. The author did a good work with the discription, it draws readers in. I really enjoyed reading this book

4 years ago
1
asdgvcxz
asdgvcxz

A very solid webnovel in it's current state. There are a few things that should be worked on such as punctuations and whatnot but the overall story is quite engaging, I like the world building and the characters aren't all that bad. The character design really doing it for but maybe that's cause I lack imagination. Overall has a great story and plot, looking forward to future chapters and what's to come.

5 years ago
1
Dante_Luca
Dante_Luca

In all honesty I didn't read enough chapters to give this kind of score. But I've got to say this novel has a lot of potential, there are a few grammar mistakes here and there but at the same time every novel that you will read will have these small grammar mistakes so it's alright. the author makes sure to update this novel frequently giving us a lot of chapters. as a said before I didn't read enough chapters yet, so I don't know if the story development is good or not, but at the first couple of chapters the story does progress in a nice and easy way helping the reader understand a bit about the history of the characters but not revealing too much. the character Design is very good as all of main characters in the beginning are described well and are talked about in an interesting manner. the world background is also very good at the first chapters from ancient times to current time. I'm going to continue reading this and give a better review with better details - I believe that if you have free time you should read this, the story is already very interesting in the first chapters. author-nim please keep up with the good work!

4 years ago
1
R_F_T_S
R_F_T_S

Shameless author review here, this is my first novel and I see great things coming out of it. So read and leave a review. I'm open to constructive criticism so lay it on me coz I know that my work ain't perfect in the slightest 😅

5 years ago
1