In Marvel as Ultimate Skill Raphael
*Note*This novel was previously named Marvel: Age of Raphael.
Mars died and by chance met Ahura Mazda, a powerful entity who claimed himself as the source of all Creation.
On given the chance to reincarnate with a perk, he denied it and asked to be adopted by Ahura Mazda instead.
Good Thing is that he was adopted by him, given Infinite Potential, Bad thing is that Avengers are after him since he transmigrated as Ultron.
Let's see how he changes the meaning of power itself, explores the wonders of Marvel Multiverse to his journey of Anime Multiverse, and Creates his very own World.
Note- English is not my main language, so the first chapters might not be up to the mark, though it will get better on.
Note- The pic is the property of the original owner, not mine.
The sypnosis is wrong, the Avengers didn't attack him because he's Ultron, they attacked him because he decided to act like a genocial cringelord for no reason other than... Well, REASONS. Don't ask me, I don't know why. He said he didn't want to be OP instantly, but then he gave himself all the possible Resistance Skills, two entire Chaps about 3K words each were spent on watching create new OP Skills, then he went on to absorb the Mind Stone– One of the Singularities left after the Universe's creation with little to no trouble. Well, what did I even expect from a Fic who the first being the MC met is supposed to be the TrUE GoD who the OAA is supposedly just an extension of him or whatever. This Fic is like Junk-Food, it's good to consume if you don't care and just want an OP Protag who will probably steamroll his way through the Multiverse to satisfy your craving, but I won't recommend turning on your brain midway, or you might get an aneurysm.
Wow 🤩😍. .. ... Nice Story . .. . i Love Tensura so obviously 5 Star. Raphael is OG, Don't Drop, . . and Keep up the good work.
Writing quality needs improvement. Does ruin the experience somewhat, but the story itself is understandable. Updates? Need more. Always need more. Not enough. Always h u n g r y. Story development is mostly fine. Some characters are inaccurate somewhat, mostly due to bad english probably.
cringe with your MC bro, a literal edgelord with OP powers. the system sheet takes up almost half the chapter, it needs to be summarized again. the reader will be bored if half the chapter only contains the status of the mc and the system.
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In short, mc reincarting in marvel with Tensura power, genderless and name himself Rachel. So in summary MC is A PSYCHOPATH THAT KILL EVERY MAGOR CHARACTER IN MARVEL AND THEY IS COUNTLESS DUMB PLOT. But it's a bit good starting at chapter 20+ but BECOME SUPER BAD SRYLE AGAIN *Sob* 😭, THIS AUTHOR DESTROYED MY Rimuru into a Dumb Stupid and psychopath mc. Sigh i made a huge mistake on reding this stupid novel.
Imma be 100% honest, it’s a good idea but the story isn’t written to its best potential, and the grammar is kinda hard to follow and worsens the story but still, good job author I’m not gonna write a super hateful review bc I don’t have the ability to write a good story so I’m not gonna be mean
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writing style and grammer was as good as you can get. story is just unbearable, because of two words, edgelord mc. the author says in a q&a chapter his rational but tbh the explanation was just as bad. marvel fanfics for some reason always tend to either be edgelord psycho trash or simp mega hero. this on was the first category.
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I don't understand why such a high rating?.................................... Reading the comments on this fic, I'm wondering if I'm reading the same thing as them?......................
It was kinda good until the whole turning into an edgelord psycho and killing people thing. Powerscaling suck too, with OAA being at only 2A? Seriously.
[IDEAS FOR RAPHAEL] [IDEA ONE] {World}: Fate/Stay Night: Heavens Feel {Plot}: One day while observing different universe’s Raphael came across a unique timeline in the Nasuverse, one where kiritsugu died in the fire before he saved Shirou with Avalon. Now usually the most he might do is heal the kid up, and maybe give him a little something to help him out. But this Shirou was very different from the others. So different in fact that he could possibly use all at least all five known true magic’s of his world if properly nurtured, something Raphael intends to do by adopting the boy. {Status}: Name: Ahura Murumasa Shirō Species: True God Age: ? Crest: Wisdoms Crest Primary Divinities: Blacksmithing, Swords, Good, Evil, Destruction Lesser Divinities: Heroes, Treasure, Space, Time, Wisdom, Soul, Creation Origin Skills: [God of Destruction: Shiva] Primordial Skills: [Forge God Core: Shirō]|[Pandoras Box] Ultimate Skills: [King of Heroes: Gilgamesh]|[King of Knights: Arthur Pendragon]|[Second Magic: Kaleidoscope]|[Third Magic: Heavens Feel]|[Fourth Magic: Gods Library]|[Fifth Magic: Magic Blue]|ect……… Name: Sakura Species: Divine Demoness Age: ? Crest: Wisdom Crest Origin Skills: (None) Primordial Skills: (None) Ultimate Skills: [Goddess of True Love: Parvati]|[All The Worlds Evil Angra Mainyu]|[God of Endless Love: Kama]|ect………
I wanted to like it, I really did. But man it’s rough reading a story where the author doesn’t use quotation marks. I don’t know why certain authors just refuse to use them.