A Love Pure And Deadly
Author: Mmesoma Annabel
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Moving to a new town and a fresh start isn't what Miguel envisioned his senior year to be. His plans was to keep a low key, graduate high school and move to Seattle, but fate have a different plan for him.Plans in form of three dashing young men, boys that seems to rule their tiny town where strange things are happening. When things seems to get out of hands and his life is threatened, Miguel have no choice but to seek refuge in the arms of the three bad boys and did I mention they are Alphas.
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First in on chapter 12. I'll do another review once I'm finished. The writing is weird. There are no "I"s in "I am". It's choppy in some places. Then there's the names of people. The triplets' names are Daniel, Donald, and Damien, but for some reason their names change to David, Dennis, and other names starting with a "D". It makes it confusing who is talking. But the story is great, the character development is on point, and the main character is awesome!
I'm at chapter 59. It still has grammar and writing mistakes. The characters now are advancing though. It's getting frustrating. There is no communication between the mc and really anyone else. 😕 He keeps in his head a lot. Most of the book is in people's heads and not interactions. And the talk in their heads are the same things over and over again. I'm getting really bored right now. I'm going to soldier through because I like the characters and the potential this story has. At 59 chapters in, it could have been maybe 30 if you take out the fluff and repetitive thoughts.