SEDUCING TRENT VANDERWOOD

good story, good concept, excellent characters, want more chapters 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

this is an amazing book you are very talented author, I like the placing of your words, the suspense you give in every chapter making a reader wants to go on and on. great novel👍

The writing quality isn't bad. But the mistake I've noticed in several places is that you use punctuation (,) at the end of many dialogues instead of (./!/?). Or you forget to put (?) when someone asks something. Another mistake(not necessarily grammar) is that you leave too often blank spaces between your phrases. It's ok to leave a blank space from time to time, for example between 2 people's dialogue or spread a description in multiple smaller pieces; but leaving a blank space between every one or two phrases of a few words is a hard no! I didn't read the whole story so I'll give 5* to Story Development. As well as for character design, in the parts that I read, I didn't see anything that told me about the characters, so I leave it 4*. The world background is almost nonexistent, In every chapter should be an amount of description which says where are the characters, how is the weather, is it cold/warm, the senses of smell/sight/hearing etc. In the last two chapters, I saw only dialogue with not enough information about where the action happens. I hope this review will be helpful!

I'm actually not fun of romance but this novel was literally busin, keep it up author and I hope your novel would get its right views........

Interesting. Keep up the good work, I like the characters. The main lead is crazy and I hope that he won't make her crazy. keep up the good work Author.

Is nice, it has a good storyline. The male is a very interesting character, so I want to see more of him, I also want to see how Ella will win his heart and save her families reputation.

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Is really interesting, I like the characters and the way the story is going. I wish you success keep up the good work and make to correct your mistakes before you publish any chapter, also give me spoilers. 🤓

I love the story it has potential, but you need to improve your writing skills. if anyone is looking for a novel to read, I will highly recommend you read this book.

So far the story seems interesting, it has a lot of plot twists and wow moments but you will need to improve your writing skills. I don't have much to say

It has a nice and interesting storyline, but you have to improve your writing skills and improve your word background, You're trying with your description but you still need to improve. I love the story keep up.

I love it, it has an amazing storyline. I am not a fan of vampire novels, but I like this one because it doesn't focus much on the vampires. keep up the good work.

It is progressing greatly. The male lead is arrogant and narcissistic but interesting, the female lead has a valid motive to work under him and the side characters commentary are also noteworthy. World building is great uptill now. Keep it up and please upload more contents.

the story is nice. is going in a good direction although there are a lot of mistakes. I can see our Author is improving. Good luck I wish you success.