The translation is honestly horrible, if the author fixes it up the story would probably be really good. It is a headache just trying to read it.
3 months ago
3
MeLucawolf
I like this pokemon fic even translated
3 months ago
2
Sergiy1
Like this fic. Thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
3 months ago
2
Morpheus_45368
it's the best give us more..............
4 months ago
2
Gargoros
Pacesing sucks otherwise good
Revert thing is awesome and really good except for the pacing good story a good amount of changes to the original. Everything is good except for the paceing
2 months ago
1
Denzil_Alvares_8772
Joint Ash journey in Kalos at my patreon account your support is much appreciated
Thank you
3 months ago
1
scarlet_mars
you keep say join your patreon but not what it is i like the book and want to read more
a month ago
0
Exellus
Its a pretty good pokemon fic that everyone should definitely give a chance to..........................................................................
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The translation is honestly horrible, if the author fixes it up the story would probably be really good. It is a headache just trying to read it.
I like this pokemon fic even translated
Like this fic. Thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
it's the best give us more..............
Pacesing sucks otherwise good Revert thing is awesome and really good except for the pacing good story a good amount of changes to the original. Everything is good except for the paceing
Joint Ash journey in Kalos at my patreon account your support is much appreciated Thank you
you keep say join your patreon but not what it is i like the book and want to read more
Its a pretty good pokemon fic that everyone should definitely give a chance to..........................................................................