The translation is honestly horrible, if the author fixes it up the story would probably be really good. It is a headache just trying to read it.
4 months ago
7
MeLucawolf
I like this pokemon fic even translated
4 months ago
2
Sergiy1
Like this fic. Thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
5 months ago
2
Morpheus_45368
it's the best give us more..............
5 months ago
2
Lema404
this is a 3-star story at most as a whole. The main issue is that at chapter 176, Ash is 10 years old, so there will be nothing adult related at all and all, and interactions between the mc and other people due to his age just seem meh. The second problem is the lack of creativity in the fanfic. While the story is bearable, it is neither good nor bad. The last problem is that the translation at the beginning could be rated 5 stars, but from chapter 75ish onwards, degrades to between 2 and 3 stars.
TLDR- 10yo mc is ok for a few chapters, but not 150.
- Bearly no originality from anime
- Translation goes from good to bad
25 days ago
1
Gargoros
Pacesing sucks otherwise good
Revert thing is awesome and really good except for the pacing good story a good amount of changes to the original. Everything is good except for the paceing
3 months ago
1
Denzil_Alvares_8772
Joint Ash journey in Kalos at my patreon account your support is much appreciated
Thank you
4 months ago
1
scarlet_mars
you keep say join your patreon but not what it is i like the book and want to read more
2 months ago
0
Exellus
Its a pretty good pokemon fic that everyone should definitely give a chance to..........................................................................
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The translation is honestly horrible, if the author fixes it up the story would probably be really good. It is a headache just trying to read it.
I like this pokemon fic even translated
Like this fic. Thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
it's the best give us more..............
this is a 3-star story at most as a whole. The main issue is that at chapter 176, Ash is 10 years old, so there will be nothing adult related at all and all, and interactions between the mc and other people due to his age just seem meh. The second problem is the lack of creativity in the fanfic. While the story is bearable, it is neither good nor bad. The last problem is that the translation at the beginning could be rated 5 stars, but from chapter 75ish onwards, degrades to between 2 and 3 stars. TLDR- 10yo mc is ok for a few chapters, but not 150. - Bearly no originality from anime - Translation goes from good to bad
Pacesing sucks otherwise good Revert thing is awesome and really good except for the pacing good story a good amount of changes to the original. Everything is good except for the paceing
Joint Ash journey in Kalos at my patreon account your support is much appreciated Thank you
you keep say join your patreon but not what it is i like the book and want to read more
Its a pretty good pokemon fic that everyone should definitely give a chance to..........................................................................