Ascension of the Nephilim

As the author, I'll leave the first review ever. I think it's awesome. I like it. Really, I do. I am having fun writing this and I enjoy and laugh as I write it. I like my own work. I now that sounds narcissistic but it is what it is. Anyway, I only placed this review to help me get the necessary 10 reviews so that it will display stuff. As for what I can say about this story: It won't be a generic MC 'fighting' his way and overcoming his enemies through sudden power-ups and cliché things. The story and journey itself would be unique. it won't be an MC traveling from one place to another, finding trouble, and beating baddies. It'll be complicated. It'll be weird. Since I'm weird.

The writing allows for great understanding, so I am honest when I say this story is mediocre. There is slow meaningless development; it took four chapters for the introduction to end. The God Of Time’s sole purpose is to add tons of useless info. Sending them back in time and gasping at how fantastic our main character is, is the only nice thing he does. What might you look forward to when reading? A system. Boring dialogues that may last entire chapters. An eternally sealed protagonist. What I dislike The seal is a major part of the story. But the author doesn’t care about it. There is no information on it and no action against it. The seal is simply there, and the main character is weak.

Interesting intial premis engaging first couple of chapters before a sharp decline. if your looking for a more whimsical or comedy based story this would work but the 4th wall breaking and overall lack of seriousness lead Me to lose interest.(disclaimer only read first 30 chapters)

Honestly, I love this book. I only recently started it but I love the author’a sense of humor, the premise is good and the grammar is good. An absolutely phenomenal read so far, I’m looking forward to where this book goes!

no character development or actual character details of anyone that is not the MC. I can't help but skim and give up on the story because the characters don't make any sense.

It started as awesome, but it gets boring afterward and the jokes between the mc and the god of time are not funny at all.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Can't take the story seriously. The story itself seems serious and interesting but the jokes are too forced. The premise of the story seemed good but the jokes broke the balance. Would had been a good without the time God info dumping and making dumb jokes.

I think I’m Around 25-30 chapters in and I just can’t Stick with it. Mostly because it’s Just power after power after power. Like I can understand since it’s A time travel Novel. But atm it feels like there’s No substance In there. No actual plot.

It’s just non-stop talking. Nothing much actually happens but talk after talk after talk between characters. I new at some point I couldn’t anymore. IF I can’t for free chapters, I wouldn’t imagine chapters I’d have to pay. Not worth my time. Started off good and has an interesting premise, but wow… way to break the most basic rules of storytelling.

I was shocked how no reviews point out how bad the lack of actual editing is in the initial chapters. There is little to no explanation of what is happening, just a massive info dump and random character names thrown at you without any connection fostered between the reader and the story. Hardly any world-building leads to large portions of chapters feeling tedious and a time waste to read. Bad sentence flow, poor wording and terrible jokes made me drop this. The overall premise of the novel is interesting. However poorly executed and very generic regarding naming.

I like the novel, but the CONSTANT 4th wall breaks AND constantly talking about how they are 4th wall breaks was so off putting that I dropped the novel.

dumb progress of the story and dumber mc. The great being supporting the MC is mental himself and the naming sense of the chapters is just trash.

I am just going to say thar i really enjoy this novel so far and i was looking through the chapter titles and noticed that chapters 61 through 70 say never, going to, give, you, up, never, going to, let, you, down, the commas are different chapter titles

I enjoy this book Mc is very powerful but isn't op so he still grows stronger without having to run from everything because he is weak which is something I enjoy