RE: ZET-MAN!

This is so amazing i haven't seen a Zet man fanfic so maybe I'm being partial but this is a unique and creative idea please don't drop Author ;)))

Yo a zet man fanfiction? impossible, i have never seen one before. ..................................... My reaction to zet man fanfiction:

Author plays ra*e for jokes, m.c. has been problematic from the begin. I hate the fact i put up with author's inane bull on "lets see what he does be patient" after someone pointed out that author is playing off ra*e (harlyquin ra*ing him) as a joke... And ofcourse what do we see after waiting m.c. is picking up the "perfect clothes" for her in the best shops possible. After he gets ra*ed... I swear this dude thinks men getting sexually assaulted is funny. Screw this story.

its ok. hopefully u dont nerf him like your last fanfic. i hated that so much. i kinda wanted to punch you through my screen. if you dont nerf its going to be a good fanfic.

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Writing quality (2 stars, there are errors but it is understood when reading). Update Stability (3 stars, the author is active). History Development (3 stars, entertaining but plot incongruent). Character design (3 stars, innovative to use the concept of zet-man but I don't see a deep character development, lack of logic and reasoning, somewhat cliché the secondary characters). General context (3 stars, it's fine to pass the time while you wait for the update of your favorite novel or fanfic, it's not a gem but it's average). (Traductor Google)

This story actually exceeded my expectations most DC fanfics end up being filled with predictable cliches and annoying tropes but this one has been quite unique. I also like how the protagonist wishs were different from what you offten get to see and didnt feel useless as thier going to be important in the long run. Im excited to see how things develop keep up the good work author.

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Reading this it seems like it seems like it’s gonna be great!👍 Just please don’t nerf him when he gets strong because their are so many strong people in DC to fight🙏

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I really don't do a full 5 stars review but I've gone through 40+ chapters and i can say truthfully. This is an amazing fanfic. Every part of the story is intriguing and interesting to read. An unique approach using a really underated character, that is Zetman. The pace is good, the characters feel believable, and the MC is charismatic. So far the story has been good and i hope that the Author keep doing the good job till the end. Great potential.

Absolutely fantastic. Straight up warm dream material here. You need to read this or you will live a live of regretting not reading it.

This Fanfic is about the MC with The Gamer interface, that's solely maximizing the potential of his Zet-Man powers, in the DC Universe. Now prior notice that my [next pharagraph] bar isn't working, so this might be a bit tedious to read. But, I'll try to be as concise as possible for this review. First up: Writing Quality - There are 5 levels of writing profeciency, and by reading up to chapters 1-18, I analyzed that it was at Intermediate level, and ranging from Low to Mid sublevel while occationally tapping the High sublevel. I won't be explaining the full definition, but basically, still at readable level. As for the grammars, syntaxes are okay, but needs to work on exact word meaning, doesn't regard much the standard dialogue format. Errors here and there, typical for beginner writers. Story Development - Has great potential, but a bit rushed on multiple instances whereby needs more context, and follow-ups. Fragile and disarrayed plot developments. Character Design - An original idea, considering the potential combination of Zet-Man with The Gamer system. A bit inconsistent and needs to improvement in regard with the data to actual performance. Updating Stability - Not an idea. World Background - DC Universe, starting in an orphanage.